Oof, this hurts. I love seeing unrequited out of these two- I imagine even if they did go through periods of happiness it would always return to this place, but your nearly lovesick enraptured Stefan is so heartbreaking here. And Damon is appropriately heartless- his insights and his taunting are spot on.
Goodness--I think I was focusing so much on the characterizations and their interactions that I didn't realize just how desolate this made poor Stefan sound. His outlook is fairly bleak and I suppose it makes Damon just that much more cruel.
Thanks for the insight into my story! ;) And thank you for the feedback!
It wasn't until I read this and the comment above that I realized just how hopeless I'd made the situation for Stefan. Thank you for your feedback! I appreciate it!
Well, I wouldn't say hopeless. After all, Stefan's got pretty much forever to get his act together and show Damon what's what. At that particular moment things do look pretty bleak, though.
That's true. Stefan's already seen that he can get a rise out of Damon and is one of the few on the planet who can. And, like they say, it's a thin line between love and hate. It's probably only a matter of time--which, as you noted, they have plenty of. :D
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Thanks for the insight into my story! ;) And thank you for the feedback!
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Poor Stefan, though. He just doesn't seem to have any idea what to do about Damon.
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