Comments | dhoney: Desperate

dhoney

Desperate

Feb 11, 2011 16:12

Theme: I wanted to get rid of aggression (#11), Reasons People Have Sex, fc_smorgasbord
Prompt: Makoto/Nephrite - Hair pulling
Genre: Smut
Rating: NC17

( Ever have one of those days? )

makoto, reasons people have sex, smut, nephrite

Comments 3

sea_thoughts February 12 2011, 01:03:54 UTC

Wow, poor Makoto. I can feel her frustration in the writing and the way her actions are rough, almost painful, until Noboru just gives her that look which says "I love you but are you okay?" And then she's finally able to relax. Poor Makoto.

dhoney February 14 2011, 19:41:08 UTC

Oh no! Don't feel bad for her - she just got feel-better-sex! And it worked! She definitely had a rough day - I'm glad that came through - but all is now good in Mako-land; and Noboru-land by extension ;)

sea_thoughts February 14 2011, 19:57:08 UTC

Ha, I just felt bad that she'd had such a bad day. I don't feel sorry for her about the sex or having such a supportive guy. ;)