Story Share

Sep 30, 2009 14:53


Damn. I really wanted to do a sequel to "Following Seduction" but that didn't happen, & I needed to post something this month & this was the only thing I cranked out.

Blah.  *sigh*  At least it's something

Title: Story Share
Prompt: I wanted to have something to tell my friends (#13), Reasons People Have Sex, fc_smorgasbord
Genre: Fluff
Rating: PG13

“I thought you wanted to study” )

reasons people have sex, zared, ami

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charliechaplin2 September 30 2009, 19:24:40 UTC
Hahahahaha!!!!! Oh my God this is hilarious! I love how you bring out Ami's wicked side so easily. What's crazy is that it's so in character too. She totally would be able to get up and go study straight afterwards. What was absolutely priceless though was Zared. I could just see it all play out, it's incredible how blind guys can be when it comes to sex. Give him a few minutes, I'm sure he'll realise he loved being used. I'm going to read this again. And again. I laughed so loud. I suppose it's because Zared's normally always the one who has the upper hand. ^_~

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dhoney October 24 2009, 22:45:18 UTC
Gr, I can't believe I never replied earlier to you & V. Worst author ever. Anyway.

I suppose it's because Zared's normally always the one who has the upper hand.

Which is exactly why I wrote this. Everyone already knows I like it's-always-the-quiet-ones-Ami; in my world, it just fits that even though she might not do it often & when she does, it's mostly self-serving, she could take the initiative if she wanted to. ;)

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venusorbit1 October 1 2009, 03:29:37 UTC
DAMN, SON!

GOD AAAAH HILARIOUS and YAAAAY HONEY IS STILL AROUND and OMFG LOL because Ami/Zared is just <3 and especially after "We did". Because in Ami's linear mind, playtime's over, and it's study time now. I guess her trip report is going to be something like, "This weekend? I studied and had sex. How about you?" XD

The mental image of Zared almost eating shit while stripping down was another huge LOL.

So...what are the other reasons why people have sex?? You must write about these, too!!

Also I <3 You, Honey!

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dhoney October 24 2009, 22:42:55 UTC
Still around & will hopefully crank some sort of drabble out before the end of the month (which is next week! *headdesk*).

And that's all she wanted. Something besides, "I studied."

I love that you used the word linear, because that's exactly how she's thinking. It's like she has a checklist. "Essay. Sex. Calculus. Groceries (buy more condoms)."

Oh there are 199 other reasons people have sex, V. ONE HUNDRED AND NINETY NINE! I will never finish all of those.

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venusorbit1 October 27 2009, 00:24:04 UTC
Well I think you should at least TRY!!!

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lovelylytton October 15 2009, 14:14:19 UTC
But she used him in such a nice way, I'm sure he doesn't mind! :)

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dhoney October 24 2009, 22:22:56 UTC
He wants to rant about using people for their bodies & the sexism involved in assuming he wouldn't mind, but if it was the other way around, Rei would rip him a new one.

But he really, really doesn't mind & actually hopes she'll use him again. Soon. And often.

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charliechaplin2 October 17 2009, 11:18:57 UTC
HAPPY BIRTHDAY FOR YESTERDAY HUN! Just read this again and I still think it's funny. I love Ami's confidence. This is totally what she would be like if she'd gotten over her love letter fears.

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dhoney October 24 2009, 22:38:51 UTC
Thank you for the happy wishes!

Oh my Ami's totally comfortable around Zared by now. Sometimes, she even walks around without pants! Which he encourages. Because he doesn't like pants either. On himself or her. Or any other female. He would prefer if his male friends kept their pants on though. Just sayin'. ;)

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sea_thoughts January 16 2010, 14:55:39 UTC
Ouch. Poor Zared. I do like the way Ami's completely able to separate her need for sex and her need to study though. She's definitely someone who can compartmentalise.

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