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Sugar-Muffin (David/Bobby, PG)

Jul 06, 2006 01:54

Title: Sugar-Muffin
Author: jaygoose
Pairing: David Hodges/Bobby Dawson
Warnings: Pseudo-conversation; yet another horrible nickname
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: They belong not to me.
Summary: Smushy, fluffy goodness.
Author's Notes: Written for the csi50 challenge, set #3, theme #029 (Falling).
Word Count: 286

( You’d smile back. You’d touch him if he’d let you and say… )

user: jaygoose, fiction, title: sugar-muffin, pairing: david/bobby, rating: pg-13

Comments 5

anonymous July 6 2006, 10:17:06 UTC

Thank you so much. I loved this. I love David, I love Bobby. Love Love Love!! Margie

sephirothflame July 6 2006, 18:37:16 UTC

This confused me a little at first, but after re-reading it I've come to the conclusion that this was undeniable a very sweet and awesome ficceh. One of the sweetest I've read in a while. :)

I love the "kill you for what you were thinking" line. Something about is just so amusing (not that the rest of this fic isn't, I can assure you it is).

Keep up the guud work, hun. :) This pwns.

Sephiroth Flame

csi_niteowl July 7 2006, 21:58:46 UTC

I loved it. You have David died on. And I could see his expression when Bobby called him sugar muffin. lol

Niteowl

yo_helena July 10 2006, 03:08:34 UTC

Oh, my. The sweetness. I love sweetness. Angst and humor and everything is good and all, but sweetness is the very best. *cluthes fic to heart* You have my undying love and adoration for this! ♥

I LOVE Bobby's POV! And you wrote in second person, which can be darn hard at times! (I stay away from it. It scares me. 0_0) David's sarcasm = less than three. So much love for his lines, and heck, he isn't even talking!

Sugar-muffin. Yeah, Bobby's just asking to die. (My dad calls mom "sugar britches" [we live in the south] and "dragon lips". The latter isn't as flattering, but I find it to be quite humorous.)

I live for your Bobby/David fics! One of them should be about a Secret Santa (MY FAVORITE PROMPT, because so many romantic hijinks can ensue!) Or buying a birthday card! Or taking a picture! Or getting the mail! Or taking a shower! Or cleaning out a closet! Or anything, because you could write about them sitting and doing nothing, and it would be awesome. :D

jaygoose July 10 2006, 04:09:09 UTC

Oh second person was way more fun than I ever expected. This is my first try with it and I was a little worried it might be confusing. I'm also just thrilled that you knew that this was from Bobby point of view with out me coming right out and saying it. I am THRILLED.

Sugar-Muffin I called someone that a long time ago. He hated it. Which meant it stuck of course.

I have so many more Bobby/David fics to go that there's no telling how many of those ideas of your's I'll probably end up using. I've only finished 7 that means I've got 43 to go. XD