White Light Lie (Part 5/5)

[yo_helena]

Title: White Light Lie (Part 5/5)
Author: helena_eternal
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Warnings: Unbetaed! :D Pleeease ignore all mistakes. I just wanted it over with! 0_o
Pairings: Nick/David
Summary: Only five more hours until show time.
Spoilers: Just Like HeavenA/N: Ah, the last chapter for my AU challenge. This has been so much fun to

Comments

[kal_rhys_sian]

Seriously brilliant!!! So highly addictive that it should come with warning labels.

I have never seen the movie, but that didn't matter one bit and don't worry about Chapter 5 being hard to follow with the two David's. I had no trouble.

I am so sad that it ended, cause as I hinted your David/Nick is so highly addictive and I can't help wanting more.

Your storetelling skills keep amazing me - it was warm and humourous, sad and thoughtful, dramatic and angst-filled, everything rolled up in a lovely package.

I'm hoping that more will be coming soon, cause I'll be haunting this list for more of your fan-freaking-tastic fics.
Cheers :)

[elanor_fields]

:gasp: gotta catch my breath XD

that was BEAUTIFUL. i might sound like an idiot, but i REALLY CRIED at the part where nick finds out that david can't remember him. and it's not just because i am the world's biggest waterfall (which is true.) you wrote it so perfectly sweet and poignant and i just had to feel for nick there. this was my face ----> T.T

the ending was so incredibly cute. the SWAMI HAT! david certainly has a long history with it, doesn't he? i also think your jacqui is perfect: she's a tough woman who just wants to be a girl sometimes.

the plot, the characterization- they were all wonderful! and i can't help but love your jim. now, you can be proud that you made this girl bawl her eyes, and crawl into a closet and think of more wonderful fic ideas! go, go, go!

i'll be expecting a sequel ^^ i can dream, right?

Elanor.

[csi_niteowl]

Does it have to be the last part? ) :

Wow! What can I say? This was such a good story. I almost cried when David woke up and didn't remember Nick. And I thought Nick letting David have his apartment back was so touching (and very sad).

“We can touch,”

What a beautiful line. You are an amazing writer.

Niteowl

[i_be_jimi]

beautiful and i love the irony that im lisstening to What Sarah Said by Death Cab For Cutie (ugg spelling) i love the ending i really want a sequal to know what happens next and even though it was AU your Hodges was very realistic
<3's
-jimi

[duckduck]

I read the novelization, and while I liked it a lot, I enjoyed your version much better. You're a very skilled writer for someone your age (which I'm sure is annoying to hear, and I apologize for that) but I'm really very impressed.

Thank you for sharing this. I really, really liked it.