Title: Countdown
Summary: Nick’s burial incident, through the eyes of the lab technicians.
Characters: Lab techs; Greg; Grissom; Sara; Nick
Disclaimer: Hahaha, definitely not.
Spoilers: Grave Danger.
Rating: PG-13
A/N: Thanks for the beta, Kelly. This was written for
philosophy_20, for prompt #14: Parallel.
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5, 4, 3, 2, 1. )
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In any case, well done!
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Heeee, icon love!
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TECHS ARE LOOOOOOOOOOVE! To see it all from each labrat's POV is awesome. Jacqui worrying about Greg, Archie chewing the gum, Bobby living off coffee... Ronnie with his wife, especially, because you have to wonder how spouses react to these sorts of situations. Of course, I couldn't wait to see David's little part. It's so great that he recognized how much Nick affected the lab and people around him, even David.
The way your wrote it, too: Jacqui shivered, Archie shook his head, Bobby sighed... it's all adding up to when Nick's rescued, and that's amazing to see. Great prompt answer, too. You rock challenges. *high fives!*
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