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Dec 18, 2005 20:13

Hey all, I'm new to joining this community but not to lurking here ^^ I thought that since I claimed Hodges over at fanfic100 I should make friends at his fan club ^^ As a gift, I bring my first posted CSI story, which also happens to be my first prompt ( Read more... )

title: who?, fiction, pairing: none, rating: pg, user: gsmaxwell

Comments 3

psychater December 19 2005, 02:37:39 UTC

This is probably the only time in which I shall hate Catherine and Warrick. How dare they accuse David like that.
Anyway, liked your fic, you've got David quite right, especially the part in the hospital(:
Now, how about we see them get together, eh? Greg and David I mean, lol;)

sarcasticsra December 19 2005, 21:14:30 UTC

I like it, and I think Greg and David are quite IC. However, may I recommend getting someone to beta? You have a few small errors that would be fixed if you had someone look it over before you posted.

For exmaple, "scrape goat" should be "scapegoat." That's just one thing I saw. There were a couple others.

On the whole, though, great job, and welcome to the comm! =D

*waves* yo_helena December 21 2005, 07:03:36 UTC

*waves* 'Ello and thanks for joining the comm!!! *huggles!* First of all, you claimed him at ff100? That means 100 David-centered fics? *dies of happiness* That's beyond awesome. I actually grabbed the David/Nick pairing there, so it's very exciting. You must post your table here when you get the time!

Second, this fic was awesome! I felt so bad for him in that episode; Warrick and Cath were a bit harsh and I know he couldn't have felt good about it. However, you dealt with his emotions with a superb grasp of both eloquence and truth. Just the way he kept asking himself Did I do this? Did I do this? is great, 'cause we all know he was asking himself that, but we didn't see it on the show ( ... )