Untitled Part 2... Revisited

[yo_helena]

Title: Untitled, Part 2... Revisited
Summary: It's impossible now.
Pairing: Greg/David
Rating: PG
Author's Notes: The lovely and wonderful curledfries let me take hold of her story Untitled, Part 2 (First part here!) and do with it what I would. So I did. Go me.

Oh, and un-beated. Early posting+no beta=hazard! ^_-

Comments

Electra says...

[anonymous]

*sniff*

Who would have thought that Greg would deny his love in such a cruel way? The plot is heart-breaking, really!

*sniff*

But I can understand David very good; what a way to learn that your love is playing dirty.

*sniff*
*cuddleteddybearforcomfort*

Love, Electra

[kerry_louise]

Oh God people in this comm and trying to break my heart aren't they... damn it this is evil. It's not at all fair, no, no, no... goodly written and the feelings were well... totally out there and feelable (yes I know that's not a word) but still, bad, bad, bad because *sniffle*

Kez...
*Who's rushing off to find fluff as quickly as her fingers will type*

[psychater]

Made my day, love. Thank you(:

[grr_im_a_lion]

aww this was heartbreaking!! I agree with everyone else! the conflict here was really well written-Greg's conflict within himself about his love then wanting to grab it back, and Davids pain...i need to learn to write this good!!!

ooo, just as a side note, have FINALLY put my story behind a cut from like a month ago, thanks for helping!

LOVED this xx

[downloadable08]

Beautiful and heart-breaking, but I can't help hoping that Greg can do something to fix it. 'Cause yeah, words aren't enough. I totally understand David's refusal to take him back right now. But maybe if Greg did something, like 'fessing up to Warrick and Nick? Because in my own little fantasy world, there should always be a happy ending. Isn't that one of your rules, too? So what are you doing? Write, woman! *crosses fingers and hopes*