Running From Monsters Chapter 9/?

[csi_niteowl]

Title: Running From Monsters Chapter 9/?

Author: CSI_Niteowl
Pairing: David/Nick
Rating: PG -13
Warnings: slash, language, mentions of child abuse, violence

Spoilers: none
Summary: David comes face to face with his brothers.

Disclaimer: I don’t own CSI or its characters. If I did there would be a new episode every week. All original characters came

Comments

[pabzi]

WOW!!!!
lack of sleep is totally worth it (5 am)
good job! will david be ok? and what will happen to johnny and teddy?
nick didnt let david down. at all. i love hoe they both protected mary and each other.
now they'd better get to janes house before i really dont sleep for a long time!!!
keep it up!

[csi_niteowl]

Thanks. Glad you are enjoying it. Hope to get chapter 10 up soon. Try to get some sleep before then though. ( :

Niteowl

[yo_helena]

D: *FLAILS* This is just so good, and yet so bad for our boys! The two brothers... I know those kinds, and they're very, very scary. 0_0 I felt nervous when they got out, and Nick's fear of whether he could protect David and Mary was both well founded and well written.

“I think what we have here is another Petey. Isn’t that right, Davey?” That line broke my heart. Even though we never see or hear Petey, he still seems like a concrete part of this story. Also, YAY MARY! Girl power to the rescue! She was smart with that beer bottle, and I like how you made her so decisive.

The knife. 0___0 I could freak out about the knife, but I won't... wait, yes I will. NICK AND DAVID WERE ALMOST KILLED! With a knife! There was great tension and pacing and yet at the same time, I was quietly freaking out, wondering how they planned to get out of that situation. Lucky for us, our Nicky's a smart guy. ^_^

Awesome chapter! It's become so much more than I ever hoped. And here's to hoping Jane can help!

[csi_niteowl]

The two brothers... I know those kinds, and they're very, very scary. 0_0 I felt nervous when they got out, and Nick's fear of whether he could protect David and Mary was both well founded and well written.

I'm glad you said that. I wasn't sure if it came across that way. THat's how I wanted it but sometimes you never know.

I thought the "another Petey" thing was creepy when I wrote it.

YAY MARY! Girl power to the rescue! She was smart with that beer bottle, and I like how you made her so decisive.

I couldn't just have her stand there like a helpless female. ( :

Thanks for reviewing!

Niteowl

[firebubbles310]

*pouts* they cut david! poor baby. damn those guys are t.

great chapter and i hope another one is up soon. hopefully a happier one, though considering the other chapters i doubt it.

[csi_niteowl]

Thanks. Sorry for all the angst. I hope to have the next part up soon. I never intended for the story to be so long but it's taken on a life of its own.

Thanks again for reading!

Niteowl