Comments | dhodges: No Regrets (David Hodges/Greg Sanders)

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No Regrets (David Hodges/Greg Sanders)

Aug 18, 2006 21:19

Title: No Regrets
Author: moira_fae11
Rating: PG-13 for Language! *eg* Foulmouthed boys ( Read more... )

fiction, title: no regrets, user: moira_fae11, rating: pg, pairing: greg/hodges

Comments 16

pabzi August 19 2006, 11:17:05 UTC

I LIKED IT!!!!
you can also post it on: csi labrats, hodges experience, greg heart hodges, csi slash.
sorry that i dont know how to link.
keep writing. you are good!

moira_fae11 August 20 2006, 07:06:06 UTC

Thank you!!! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I'll do just that. Thanks for the suggestions. :D

attempt_unique August 19 2006, 15:07:21 UTC

I really enjoyed this fic. For some reason I adore the fact that Hodges' cat is named Ptolemy. For someone on their first foray into CSI you certainly captured both Greg and Hodges.

moira_fae11 August 20 2006, 07:10:14 UTC

Thanks very much. David definitely had a big, grumpy cat in my brain, and I had to give him a worthy name. Thusly was Ptolemy the Great formed. As for capturing them, I really appreciate it - they're definitely complex characters and therefore they like to have arguements with me as to how they should be written.

ktkm August 19 2006, 15:42:11 UTC

Wonderful! Poor Greg... his whole story... but at least he finally took action!

Oh, and only David would have a cat that is as snarky as he is ;0

moira_fae11 August 20 2006, 07:11:27 UTC

Thanks! Greg's story is a little close to my heart, so I, too, am glad he seized the day.

Ptolemy the Great rules all. >_

redfairie19 August 19 2006, 17:02:13 UTC

Wondeful!

I liked the flow of the prose, and the way Greg told his story. I think when we write, sometimes we forget that talking is much more confused than something written (especially with Greg) and you captured that perfectly.

And many giggles about Ptolemy. Such the perfect IC touch.

moira_fae11 August 20 2006, 07:15:12 UTC

Thank you! *g*

I am glad it flowed well - sometimes I think I get too wrapped up in description. The speech tends to play in my head, and then I try to get it down on the page with pauses and stuttering intact. I have a great love ... of the elipse. ;)

Oh Ptolemy. David just had to have a big, fat, grumpy orange cat. HAD TO.

elmyraemilie August 20 2006, 16:08:23 UTC

Great story. The backstory is good stuff, and the front story--Hodges' blue pj's, and Ptolemy \O/, and Greg's behavior after GD, were good too. Looking forward to more of your work.

moira_fae11 August 21 2006, 00:38:50 UTC

Thank you! *g* I'm glad you liked it all. I love that everyone loves Ptolemy ... I look forward to your comments in future! :D