First of all I really like the manip for this chapter. As to what I thought of the chapter it's self...I loved it. It was simply amazing even though the grammar was not the best. But we know that you are trying really hard and as long as you continue to produce amazing chapters like you have done so far then you will hear no moaning from me.
P.S. I tried to review this story on ff.net but there was a problem with the review thing there so I couldn't.
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I like how in the beginning Edward is trying to provoke Hermione.
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As to what I thought of the chapter it's self...I loved it. It was simply amazing even though the grammar was not the best. But we know that you are trying really hard and as long as you continue to produce amazing chapters like you have done so far then you will hear no moaning from me.
P.S. I tried to review this story on ff.net but there was a problem with the review thing there so I couldn't.
Update more soon.
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Yeah i am working the best I can with the whole grammar thing.
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