Fic: Two Months of Insanity

[dhficcer]

Title:
Two Months of Insanity
Author/Artist:
DHFiccer aka Lynn
Rating:
PG, really... Later chapters will be PG-13 or R.
Pairing or Character(s):
Gellert Grindelwald/Albus Dumbledore
Disclaimer:
Not mine, naturally. Owned by J.K. Rowling, though I hope to do them justice.
Author's Note:
Beta-read by Tree of GAFF.

Chapter Two
The Long Walk

“It really is such a

Comments

[airelement]

Wow. I loved it =)

[oudeteron]

I really like how this is unfolding. All these conversations seem so authentic! But what I like the most is your grasp on the characters, especially considering their young selves were introduced to us just recently. All in all, well done! <3

[ms_worplesdon]

Yay. It's so exciting to see a multi-chapter fic happening already. I love what you've got so far, and I can't wait to see the sparks fly further. Keep it up! :D

[lysryu]

I quite like how you write Dumbledore as being uncertain of Gellert's ideals and plans at first then gradually beginning to support his new friend. One thing though, in the last line you wrote:
"Now that he knew he had a partner in all his ideas, all this plans."
I think you mean all His plans right?

Eh anyways I hope to see more of this wonderful fic of yours,
lys

[dhficcer]

Typo fixed. Thanks for pointing it out!

[syredronning]

Wonderful series. Just started reading today, and this installment is especially good :)