Comments | dgjamie: Bohemian Legacy Chapter 4.12

dgjamie

Bohemian Legacy Chapter 4.12

Jun 27, 2009 08:48

For many many reason this chapter took me forever and I sort of struggled with it kind of alot. But here it is at last! And I hope you enjoy. I did the best I could with the slideshare format, there are still some discrepencies with the word sizing when I had too much text and not enough room. Hope it doesn't bother you guys too much. Anyway, enjoy ( Read more... )

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Comments 13

gintasticnecat June 27 2009, 20:10:44 UTC

*JOY AND EXCITEMENT FLAIL*

dutchess_axel June 27 2009, 20:23:00 UTC

oh how i love you. 8D *comment steals*

dutchess_axel June 27 2009, 20:22:31 UTC

Oh wow, what an ending of all endings.

All the teens look amazingly adorable, and I love them all. Even though they all seemed to roll the same aspirations. Would you like to borrow my die? It lands on 3 a lot!

This was another amazing chapter! I really enjoyed it. I feel so bad for Requiem, though. All she wants is to be loved. ;-;

Oh, have you joined legacychallenge ? http://community.livejournal.com/legacychallenge/ Here's the link.
It's a great way to get more readers! It's a HUGE community! :D

Again, another great job!

dgjamie June 27 2009, 20:37:44 UTC

Thanks. I've had these teens in my game for what feels like forever so it feels great to have finally been able to actually share them in an update!

I actually haven't joined that Community but I will look into it, thanks :)

smjoshsims June 27 2009, 20:25:29 UTC

Do you watch Glee? I've been obsessed with their version of "Don't Stop Believing" for weeks now. It's delicious.

Anywho, this chapter was amazing as well.

SPOILER >Saffron is so fresh, getting pregnant again. xD

Elise is so precious, I love her. I can't wait to see if she ever does become a doctor or not.

Requiem is gorgeous, and I love her hair. She's unbelievably fierce, and the scene with Aria made me so, so sad. No one deserves that. :(

The last scene was SO EERIE. Why does Rhapsody see these things?! SUSPENSE.

And Rhapsody's outfit is... interesting. xD I found myself wondering where the rest of her clothes were like 9 times. Of course, you could argue that I adhere to a sense of Victorian Modesty, but those short shorts are NOT appropriate for anyone under 21.(/font)

dgjamie June 27 2009, 20:34:35 UTC

Yes! I am absolutely obsessed with Glee! I listened to their version of the song basically all afternoon and then switched over to Journey. I want it to be fall so we can have more Rachel Berry singing joy!

Saffron got pregnant without my permission, I will allow it only because Cori is s3 and I love s3.

Glad you liked the last scene. It was an absolute Beeyotch to shoot and it still feels clunkier than I like.

Haha, you know my friend who sims says a similar thing about Dee's outfit, she looks at my pictures and goes "goodness, cover up Rhapsody!"

smjoshsims June 27 2009, 20:37:57 UTC

Isn't it an amazing show? Rachel is amazing, but Emma is my soul. I love her.

It's not clunky bb. It's great.

LOL, it's because she's naked! xD Your friend is so sensible.

geminiasp June 28 2009, 01:17:04 UTC

Holy Shiz that was an intense chapter and i really enjoyed it. I feel bad for Em in that scene with her mom, Aria is really bugging me though. i love how you had the school too and Rhapsody god i love her every moment, alien abductions and those visions are getting so much stronger for her. Maybe it does have to do with who will be there when she needs them most and who won't.

This was awesome

*goes to read it again because she can*

geminiasp June 28 2009, 01:17:51 UTC

Oh and forgiot to add Journey singing "Don't stop believing" that was funny and cool at the same time

dgjamie June 28 2009, 13:52:55 UTC

Glad you liked :)

Em definitely does not have the easiest home life. As for Dee's visions, they will be explained in due time.

<3 Don't stop believing, so I'm glad that amused you :)

missmiranda89 June 28 2009, 13:47:16 UTC

JJ- that was the official and epic awesome! I loved it so dearly! Everything- Journey singing Journey, Emmi's issues, Dee's frozen-in-time bit, it is all AWESOME. I know I've used that word already, but it is the only way to describe this update ( ... )

dgjamie June 28 2009, 14:02:54 UTC

Mandy! Hello! I am missing of the you! But yay! I'm glad you liked it! Even though it lacked your proofreading magic touch :) Thanks for all the lovely compliments. I think Em asking Aria if she loved her came as a result of the realisation that she had never heard her say it. To a certain extent she had taken it for granted that she was loved by her mother in spite of everything, when she was a kid and didn't know any better. I think she was hoping that her mother would tell her that she loved her, even though she probably knew she wouldn't. Although Aria doesn't actually say clearly either way you'll notice.

I've seen you in shorter shorts than Dee's! Although to be fair you usually wear a button up shirt with them... My point stands. Plus...desert, hot. I stand by my shorts ;)

I reeeeeally want to get to the point of revealing what's going on with the disappearing, but I've got a bunch of stuff to do before I can advance that. So until then...have some suspense! ;)

Thanks so much for the comment!