theoriginalkat wrote And You Love It for slytherinswench

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Title: And You Love It
Author: theoriginalkat
Rating: NC-17, just to be safe.
Possible Spoilers/Warnings: Post-Hogwarts
Summary: Draco and Blaise make a bet concerning the infamous Miss Weasley.
Author's Notes: Thank you to SparkNotes for their absolutely wonderful synopsis of Pygmalion by Bernard Shaw, as this fic is loosely based upon that play. It has

Comments

[softlyforgotten]

Oooh, I liked this a lot, especially the lovely smut. :D

However I was a little disappointed with your characterization of Narcissa; I thought she just didn't quite work, how accepting she was with no backstory. And I couldn't help but notice this bit of dialogue:

“Wench, you certainly know how to kill an erection.”

“I know how to bring one back, too.”

I might be remembering incorrectly, but I'm fairly sure this is a direct copy from a fic by pickled_toad - the Devil's Triangle? It's from a long time ago, but I did recognise it.

Um. Didn't want to sound too discouraging; over all it was a lovely fic.

[softlyforgotten]

I'll post anonymously to keep my identity secret until authors are revealed, but I'd like to respond to this

[softlyforgotten]

I just looked around and there is indeed a fairly good correlation from Dining With Draco by fresh_pickled_toad. It isn't a direct copy, but it is a correlation. I will add something to my author's notes when I post the story officially.

[softlyforgotten]

Ah, okay. I was a bit tentative pointing it out because it could easily have been put in there by accident, so thanks for your calm response. :)

[alissomora]

I enjoyed this -- I never twigged that Draco had been set up and you pulled it all together very nicely. I'm glad Ginny dug in her heels and refused to conform, and that Draco was forced to sit down and really think about what he wanted and how he felt :-)

[embe11ished]

I like the twists you put on the standard story--the preexisting relationship between Ginny and Draco, and especially Ginny, Blaise and Narcissa's conniving!

[xlusted_desirex]

Freaking Awesome! lol who would know Ginny would do such an evil yet brilliant thing?? I didn't. Lovely story.

[sidnandragin]

I have to say that this was a great story. I enjoyed your version of Pygmallion. CHoosing those four characters to scheme was simply outstanding. Great creativity..