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Secrets and Truth, for rainywinters

Feb 23, 2014 21:33

Secrets and Truth

Prompt: #21
For: rainywinters

Rating: R
Possible Spoilers/Warnings: None
Summary: Ginny's got a secret - or perhaps more aptly described - a bad habit. Will she be able to break it? Or will she end up wanting more?
Author's Notes: I interpreted the prompt a bit loosely. I hope you still enjoy it. Special thanks to S, C, and J! Also, big ( Read more... )

Comments 26

fantastic! anonymous March 19 2014, 19:39:31 UTC

Absolutely loved it. Tugged just enough on the heartstrings from Ginny's POV.

Re: fantastic! anonymous March 27 2014, 03:57:55 UTC

Thank you!

sunnystorms March 24 2014, 08:44:45 UTC

Loved it! Wonderful snarky and humorous banter and delicious sexual tension, which is among my most favorite things about this pairing when they get together. You have a very good handle on dialogue - it just flowed so effortlessly. Probably my favorite bit of back-and-forth between them here is this one:

/"Pulling her into his arms, he said haughtily, "Malfoys don't get sick."

It took the remainder of her energy, but she snorted. "I'm the feverish one, but you're delusional."

"Shut up and rest," he said, kissing the top of her head. "I still ended up in your bed, didn't I?"/

and Draco's: /"It's happening. It happened." His face splitting into a grin, he added, "Again."/

Hahaha. Draco was a delight to read all through this, and I loved your Ginny as well with her touch of vulnerability showing through. Great job!

sunnystorms March 27 2014, 03:57:25 UTC

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it!

xrachiebunniex March 28 2014, 23:29:10 UTC

oooh!

this one i like. I LIKE VERY MUCH! I mean.. pardon the bad england - I LOVE THIS!!!!

you have the perfect balance of light hearted humour & angst! it's just - aaaah! hit me at all the good spots, I can't even!!! SQUEEE.

i think both Ginny and Draco were perfect here - her fiery temper and his suuuuuuuaveness, i LOVE IT!

i also really love their chemistry here. it's explosive! love it love it!

13oct April 14 2014, 15:27:50 UTC

Celeste I luff this to bits. I could hug you for this. As I said, it had been wayyy too long since I have read a D/G fic that I aboutely adored. Fabulous writing as aways girl- but then that's nothing new.

How I've missed my OTP!!!