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♥ "A Joint Birthday Present" for midnight_birth ♥

Dec 30, 2008 22:18

Title: A Joint Birthday Present
Author: baroness_black
Rating: PG-13, for some language and suggested adult activity.
Possible Spoilers/Warnings: None
Author's Notes: My first fic ever, so please be brutally honest with the reviews. My awesome Beta was very patient and made lots of great suggestions, so any oddities in wording and story line are entirely my ( Read more... )

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jessicakmalfoy December 31 2008, 05:57:03 UTC

It was amazing! This was so funny with just the right amount of tension. I kept imagine rob & Harry & George (?) laughing over what they have Draco.

Really great job with the prompt & the story!

I really enjoyed it.

jessicakmalfoy January 5 2009, 12:34:14 UTC

Thanks :) I was trying to think of appropriate yet humiliating gifts from everyone and the Ron/Harry/George present was my fav too!

cyyt December 31 2008, 10:09:23 UTC

Their fight was a little worrying, cause the story was going toend soon, so I wasn't sure how it would end. But it ended really sweetly with the engagement party(: The birthday party chapter was really hilarious, great job!(:

cyyt January 5 2009, 12:49:38 UTC

Thank you, I'm so happy you liked it, especially the birthday scene!!

gidge_8 December 31 2008, 23:56:49 UTC

This was just darling. Draco's reactions during the birthday party were very well balanced. The party wasn't over the top, but just humiliating enough to be understandable about why he'd really hate it.

gidge_8 January 5 2009, 12:41:31 UTC

I'm so glad that balance came across because it was really difficult for me to write. The party was initially really dull but my lovely beta encouraged me to amp up the embarrassment! So happy you liked it :)

harrypotterchick4ever anonymous January 4 2009, 20:16:34 UTC

poor draco-he was way more composed at that party than i would have thought
what a great fic!! and the misunderstanding felt so real-a definite d/g fight that could happen
awesome job!

Re: harrypotterchick4ever anonymous January 5 2009, 12:48:06 UTC

I did torture him a bit, didn't I? Oh well, Draco knows that I love him :) I'm so happy that the argument read as realistic. Oddly, it was a lot of fun to write them yelling at each other. I kept snickering in my head at Ginny's over-reactions because I knew what was coming...

humbuggirl January 11 2009, 12:46:36 UTC

Very enjoyable. Nice work!