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Dec 24, 2008 10:14

Title: Someone Else’s Place
Author: MaryJane Weasley
Possible Spoilers/Warnings: Minor swearing but only in one place.
Author's Notes: To defend my very fragmented writing I must say that it’s all due to a book I’ve been reading in English class. Hopefully it won’t be too confusing. Enjoy!
Summary: We can’t change the past. No matter how much we ( Read more... )

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anonymous December 27 2008, 20:18:59 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you like my fic!

tudorrose1533 December 24 2008, 20:21:34 UTC

Using Harry as narrator was really effective. I liked that their love grew casually, and wasn't a torrid, intense affair--just simple love. And I loved the line about everyone being too busy to prevent it--"No one had the time to worry about anything but his or her own business." So true, and Harry is included in that group and now realizes his mistake, and I love the way you captured that feeling. Well done. :)

tudorrose1533 December 27 2008, 20:20:47 UTC

I'm happy you like my fic! I was a bit worried about how exactly Harry would appear to the readers and I'm happy he turned out the way he was supposed to.

jessicakmalfoy December 25 2008, 02:00:32 UTC

Aw! So super sweet. I loved it. So darling & romantic. Poor Harry. He totally didn't deserve Ginny.

jessicakmalfoy December 27 2008, 20:22:07 UTC

No, he never deserved Ginny. She was all Draco's from the start.
I glad you liked my fic!

lakuru_san December 25 2008, 14:52:19 UTC

I thought all along that Draco was telling the story. But then it shifted. Harry was then telling the story. I didn't realize it soon. Hahaha!

I this piece! Its refreshing to read a DG story in another character's POV. It didn't have to be too angsty or to cheesy to make it all good. Simple yet it still has the impact on the reader! I felt Harry's regret. Nice job! ^_^

lakuru_san December 27 2008, 20:26:28 UTC

I so happy my fic turned out the way it was supposed to. I also very happy that you liked it! Thank you!

baroness_black December 27 2008, 03:59:42 UTC

Very sad but well done. I loved the treatment of Harry in this story. I'm a big Draco/Ginny fan but there's no real reason to make Harry into an evil jerk-off to write their relationship. You managed to convey real pain without an emo-angst-fest and big smiles from Draco at the alter was a sweet touch. Great story :)

baroness_black December 27 2008, 20:29:09 UTC

Thank you! I happy you like my story!
I hoped that Harry wouldn't seem to be a total jerk since that wasn't my intention. I glad to see that I succeeded.
Thanks again!