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dexstarr

Fic: All That's Best of Dark and Bright

Oct 31, 2011 23:27

Title: Al That's Best of Dark and Bright
Author: dexstarr
Word Count: 4,286
Rating: R
Challenge: I wrote this for the 2010 hp_creatures fest. The original prompt was: Narcissa Malfoy has been hiding her Fae nature from her husband for years, but when Lucius begins cheating on her after the war, she has had ENOUGH. I want to see her bring Lucius to heel. Whether it's ( Read more... )

warning: creature, pairing: narcissa/lucius, warning: sex, community: hp_creatures, character: lucius malfoy, year: 2010, length: fic (1000+), fic, rating: r, warning: infidelity, character: narcissa (black) malfoy

Comments 3

reg_flint November 1 2011, 06:36:51 UTC

I really enjoyed the richness of the language, perfect for writing a Malfoy and especially these two (though I am very partial to your Pansy)
The collar was actually a little cute. Humiliation suits Lucius better than he knows.

dexstarr November 4 2011, 03:05:03 UTC

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it enough to rec it on your journal!

I had fun coming up with the descriptions for this; the Malfoys inspire sumptuous language for me. As for Pansy, I think I have one or two fics with her that I haven't put up yet from fests.

And yes, yes it does. Lucius deserved it!

reg_flint November 1 2011, 09:43:52 UTC

I hope you don't mind me reccing this fic on my journal... I have all your warnings, summary, word count, etc etc etc intact. If you wish me not to use it, let me know and I will delete. But I think everyone should read it along my fellow Snakes.