Fic: The Road to the Little Death

[dexstarr]

Title: The Road to the Little Death
Author: dexstarr
Word Count: 718
Rating: R
Characters: Bellatrix Lestrange/Narcissa Black
Warnings: Blackcest, femmeslash
Author's Note: Written for deirdre-aithne, who has spoiled me with tons of Narcissa/Pansy, so I tried to write some angst in return and well, this came out. And hey! This has the honor of being the first somewhat

Comments

[deirdre_aithne]

So I already kinda glomped you for this, but it definitely needs doing twice! :-D

The whole thing is just perfect! But the moment that gave me some major shivers of delight was this:
"Show me how grateful you are, Cissy..."
I died of squee for that moment, because even without the details in front of me, I can just see what happens next. And I might be imagining it being said with a wonderfully commanding and yet relaxed tone.

But this is everything I hoped it would be and then some! So thank you, thank you, THANK YOU!!!!

[dexstarr]

*glomps back*

Thanks, it makes me really happy that you liked it so much. Very very happy, really. I had a hard time figuring out how to end it, that's what took so long lol.

And oh yes, that line would be said with exactly that tone!

[reg_flint]

Imperious (if not imperius) and delicate, Bellatrix to Narcissa. And this line:
precisely the type that Narcissa hated and Bellatrix loved reminds me of the only woman (or man) I ever let be in a dominant position.

[dexstarr]

Thanks, I liked that line a lot myself, reminds me of some past things.

[cuzimastripper]

I totally just had to go look up what "la petite mort" meant xD I had the general idea, but I had never heard it before. I should probably use it now; sounds hot.

[...]especially not one who strutted about like a peacock.

That made me laugh. Oh Lucius, you closet Queen xD

I really liked this :) I've been so deprived of Bella/Cissy fics to read lately. I swear I've read most of them by now lol.

[dexstarr]

Thanks!

They're my femslash OTP (although there are starting to be a few other favorites vying for that sport) so I feel like I've hunted down most of the good fics too. That's kind of why thepretender501 and I started deatheatercest, because there weren't actively modded Blackcest comms around.

I should write them more, but Pansy seems to have taken up residence in my head lately.

And that babbling aside, thanks again and I'm happy you liked it!

[dexstarr]

Thanks! I love the dynamics between the two, that's part of what makes them so difficult fun to write.

[one_song_for_me]

So damn good <3

[dexstarr]

Thanks!