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Drabble: Manual Labor

Aug 05, 2010 23:05

Title: Manual Labor
Author: dexstarr
Word Count: 100 x 4
Rating: R
Challenge: Manual; Dark Fic Table #76: Anonymous
Characters: Bellatrix Lestrange, Rodolphus Lestrange
Time: First Wizarding War
Warnings: Hints at non-con. Death Eaters preparing to have their fun - what do you expect?
Author's Note: I've been waffling over posting this for about 2 weeks, ( Read more... )

character: rodolphus lestrange, pairing: bellatrix/rodolphus, warning: non-con, length: drabble (100-500), year: 2010, challenge: dark table 100 fics, fic, rating: r, character: bellatrix (black) lestrange

Comments 4

reg_flint August 6 2010, 03:30:37 UTC

Hahaha, nasty... "enchantingly nasty"
I loved her fear-ashen skin. It gave me a vivid mental image of the victim.
And I love that Bellatrix is the perpetrator, through Rodolphus.

dexstarr August 6 2010, 03:43:49 UTC

You're fast!.

The last section got completely rewritten, and the last re-write is where I came up with "fear-ashen." I'm glad you like it, I thought it was a good description!

I was really hesitant on posting this one, but hey, good practice I guess. I always imagined that Bella and Rodolphus had fun with their victims...because I never got the impression their marriage was really just for appearances. So torture had to be like...date night? Eeek.

opaljade August 17 2010, 22:12:23 UTC

Wonderful! Found the title/premise quite witty and this very much felt in character. Oh my, Bellatrix can be scary!

(Er, I found it *hawt* as well! *blushes and disapears*LOL)

dexstarr August 19 2010, 03:25:12 UTC

Thanks! As I think I put in the A/N, I was a little wary of posting this, but er yea I enjoyed it myself.

Thanks for reading and don't disappear too far :P