It was really good. ^-^ At first I was a bit confused, because there was no background (but that's the style, it doesn't need any) And then all of a sudden Wooyoung's heart was in his trunk. But then you made it all fit together in a surprising way and the end was too perfect. ♥
thanks alot for this!! i was afraid that it might be too confusing, but i was having trouble pulling it all together. it wasn't supposed to be this long, but i had to end it somehow. im really glad u dig it tho. ull find that alot of my stories have no background. lol im just lazy like that.
No problem. n_n Its perfect w/o background though. It doesn't seem like its from laziness at all. Like, you intentionally left it that way so that the reader could conjure up whatever it was that you were gisting at. It's more satisfying that way, really. And I like long stories ^-^ The length was just right. <- Ahahahaha I feel like goldilocks or something. xDD
T_________T honestly.....i just wish woo would follow Buck into the sea..muahahahahaha :P awww....the ending.. Khun grabbed a hold of Wooyoung and clung on. Wooyoung wrapped his arms around Khun and nuzzled his face into his neck. “I miss you so much.” Khun cried out. aigooo.. *sobs*
in a way it's sweet, cuz i can't see wooyoung with anyone else but i think id be sad. lol which is why i cudn't make him die. lol
omg, writting that part was soo hard, cuz i can't imagine what people go thru when they lose someone, but i know it must hurt like hell. like they'll never be together again, omg, imma break down!!! jesus, why do i write this crap. lol
T_________T i hate the part where Khun is right about Woo will find someone along the way.. thats just sucks >.< i mean..how can he be alright and alive while his khun is already dead? i just find that it's kinda impossible..huhu
wow that story left me speechless I love how you've written it, I could perfectly imagine every scene of it It was really nice to read ^^ I wonder what will Khun get if he gets back with Woo again...
oh darn this is so heartbreaking, but all the heart concepts and all is intriguing. love it :) a little part of me wished woo died just because living is going to be so much harder for him :X
after i wrote it i wished that i had killed him too, but i just cudn't but it's never gonna be the same. thats why i ended it were i did, with them hugging, because it never stops. with it ending there it prolongs the hug, making it last forever and khun never goes back. lol im a loser like that. lol
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poor woo....
life goes on babe...
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thanks alot for reading!! :D
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honestly.....i just wish woo would follow Buck into the sea..muahahahahaha :P
awww....the ending..
Khun grabbed a hold of Wooyoung and clung on. Wooyoung wrapped his arms around Khun and nuzzled his face into his neck.
“I miss you so much.” Khun cried out.
aigooo.. *sobs*
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omg, writting that part was soo hard, cuz i can't imagine what people go thru when they lose someone, but i know it must hurt like hell. like they'll never be together again, omg, imma break down!!! jesus, why do i write this crap. lol
thank u reading, hun!!!!!!!!
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i hate the part where Khun is right about Woo will find someone along the way..
thats just sucks >.<
i mean..how can he be alright and alive while his khun is already dead?
i just find that it's kinda impossible..huhu
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I love how you've written it, I could perfectly imagine every scene of it
It was really nice to read ^^
I wonder what will Khun get if he gets back with Woo again...
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im really glad u enjoy it and it left u speechless!!!! lol my goal has been met!! lol
god, i dont even wanna think about how khun will get in trouble. lol
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a little part of me wished woo died just because living is going to be so much harder for him :X
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thanks for reading!!!!!
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