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devilshole November 23 2009, 20:50:52 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yeah, angsty Kid is fun, isn't he? Poor baby.

Thanks again for reading and commenting. :-)

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solosundance November 23 2009, 17:28:27 UTC
what a fantastic love story, I adore the way they are in this. "I love you just the same as ever" ... really could squish that line to death. Thanks so much for this, it's perfect, light and intense at the same time (and hot as Hades which is all good) :))

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devilshole November 23 2009, 20:52:14 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. I actually wanted it to be angstier than it seems to have turned out - funny how that works sometimes (not that I'm good at angst generally). :-) I appreciate your comments!

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granderobino November 23 2009, 23:14:43 UTC
Oh this was well worth the wait. I love the way you write the cowboys!
Thanks for sharing this lovely story.

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devilshole November 23 2009, 23:18:14 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)

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granderobino November 26 2009, 16:24:07 UTC
Me again, just saying that I reread this, this morning, because I had to get to this scene where they are reunited on the train, as it had been on my mind. I love how you wrote this scene. I can totally see their reactions. How they are just so glad to be together.

It reminded me a little of a scene in the actual series. I can't remember the episode title, but it was one where they were separated for most of the episode and near the end Heyes sees Kid and calls across the street ("Mr. Jones!") and he has this big happy grin on his face, and you can just see how happy he is to see him (and you could swear he just wants to kiss him...but that might just be me)

Anyway...great job here!

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devilshole November 26 2009, 16:42:59 UTC
:-) Thanks! What a great compliment, that the story stayed on your mind and lured you back! Wow. I love to hear that; it really makes my day.

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beckstein59 November 24 2009, 21:41:50 UTC
OH! this was just special. You captured the Guys and the essence of their friendship and you turned it into a love story. There were so many great lines - I loved the way you had Heyes calm Kid as if he were a horse and I loved the images of naked cowboys. Thanks for a great read.
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devilshole November 24 2009, 22:22:13 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-) Thank you for reading and for commenting!

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hardboiledbaby November 28 2009, 01:27:30 UTC
Oh, that was just awesome. The voices were perfect, and I loved how you got inside Heyes' head. Thanks so much for posting this! *happy sigh*

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devilshole November 28 2009, 18:15:23 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it - and especially appreciate your saying I got the voices right; it's not always easy with these two.

Thanks again!

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