angst calms me down.

[dev_earl]

turnaround
600 words
PG. Gen.
AU

If Dean could remember, he would tell you that the man came for him first before little Sammy. He could tell you about the blood dripped into his mouth, the copper tang of it. He could tell you how Mom had walked in and saved him, told the man that not my boy, please, not him. How Mom begged, made a deal, and saved his

Comments

[minttown1]

This is beautiful. I particularly like the evolution of Dean's wishes for his life.

[dev_earl]

Thank you, sweetie. :)

[ongiara]

Absolutely heartbreaking! Oh Dean.

[dev_earl]

Thank you! :)

[scarlett_savage]

Heart-wrenching. Very well-written, polished and confident; you use this style effectively, efficiently and beautifully, the way you move back and forth in time and character study and string it all together like a particularly well crafted necklace. I LOVE your character studies, one of the major reasons being that you show and infer and imply, thereby creating a rich, living picture of the character and of the scenes.

Fantastic work, as usual :).

[dev_earl]

Thank you ever so much, sweetheart. :)

[jillybean_6939]

Dude, that was soo nice! Thanks for sharing!!

[dev_earl]

Thank you for reading. :)

[openmydoors]

Wow, didn't realize angst would calm me down too. *blinks* Beautiful.

[dev_earl]

Thank you very much. :)