Of Love, Cherries and the Words Never to Be Spoken2

Mar 03, 2009 05:24


OF LOVE, CHERRIES AND THE WORDS NEVER TO BE SPOKEN 2/2

MANA + HIZAKI FICTION

This is the second part of my psychological quest into the heads of Mana and Hizaki having a romantic relationship. However, this part mainly includes the sex... Again, point of views change and Hizaki speaks in italics.

I recommend to read the first part if you havent yet ( Read more... )

mana, hizaki, fanfiction

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deusssexmachina March 3 2009, 19:11:15 UTC
I try xD This took ages to write...

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miho_sama March 3 2009, 11:39:59 UTC
Wow... That was really beautiful. I loved how you did the sex scene, it was very sensual. It's good to read something less explicit from time to time. I think I'm going to become your reader ;-)

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deusssexmachina March 3 2009, 19:12:48 UTC
For some reason this is as explicit as I can get with them. They are too elegant for their own good.

Well if you like it please read the awfully long fic I´m working on...hehe... People are always discouraged by the multiple chapters, but it is my main focus :)

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frostyembrace March 3 2009, 17:05:48 UTC
THIS IS SUCH A SINFUL FIC!

I lol-ed at this "our body isn´t just hard muscles like I´ve observed with other men… neither is it skin and bones like mine."

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deusssexmachina March 3 2009, 19:07:22 UTC
You know I kinda thought this will the the one sentence YOU will remember LOL

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frostyembrace March 4 2009, 04:35:46 UTC
SMARTY ASS!

HAHAHHAHAHHHAA

anyway from the new GLB pic, I think he lost weight!!!
Good Job!!! I think he had a melon bread diet! j/k

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deusssexmachina March 4 2009, 10:17:17 UTC
LOL I also noticed that, he should give me advice!

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morbidprose March 3 2009, 18:55:45 UTC
elegant and yet soo hott! you really make a fic that is soo hott and sexy elegant and simply brilliant all at the same time.

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deusssexmachina March 3 2009, 19:13:52 UTC
thanks *hugs* Im happy I didn´t mess it up because that was exactly my aim :)

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morbidprose March 4 2009, 00:20:53 UTC
your welcome. you really did give that impresion with this! its brilliant.

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azndragonkeeper March 4 2009, 05:55:06 UTC
This was amazing....I love how detailed this was, so detailed I could actually picture everything in my head!

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