Of Love, Cherries and the Words Never to Be Spoken

[deusssexmachina]

OF LOVE, CHERRIES AND THE WORDS NEVER TO BE SPOKEN 1/2

MANA + HIZAKI FICTION

This is a fic I had originally intended to write for the Christmas challenge, but it is long overdue. I have to admit I had slight problems writing it, but now it´s here and I hope you like it.
It is based on the idea that two insecure people sometimes do not communicate

Comments

[deusssexmachina]

Thank you! This was really an effort to write. I had the idea and thought it would come easily, but it never seemed perfect enough for me :) I wasn´t sure about the result, so it makes me happy it turned out so good!

[tanbikakumei]

*__*
I really really like this, and you know how picky I am lol!
It's amazingly written and I like the introspection in the characters' minds, how everything -is- perfect and yet -isn't-.
I find it very inspiring, please write more ^__^//

[deusssexmachina]

hehe, and this has only two parts, so its okay for you to read xD Exactly... it is perfect but they try so hard... forgetting it could me much better even if it was natural.
There will be more :) spoilers: in the next part, we will get to know the secret of Hizaki´s age.

[elenilovesyou]

I've always wanted to read a pairing like this, you know, there's so many 'girly' jrockes paired to their princes, but in this they're both princesses. Mana and Hizaki are both so beautiful, and they are perfect for each other. This was amazing. So unique pairing and so sweet story *wwww* I can't wait you to continue.

[deusssexmachina]

weeell... I tried to work into it the recent developement of Mana, that is, that in the last few years, he gradually becomes a bit more manly... and here the reason for it is that he is trying to be more prince for Hizaki xD I thought it was a cool idea so I hope it works :))

[elenilovesyou]

To me, Mana will always be a princess no matter he does XDD but one of them has to be the prince, so don't worry, it works perfectly.
Btw I read this again last night, this time readings parts of it aloud to my friend, and just now realized how beautiful this is.

I'd quote those parts but then this would be never ending comment.

[frostyembrace]

Oh WTF!!!!

This is good and erotic! ahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!

[deusssexmachina]

Told you I can make it work even though its a bit of crack pairing XD

[morbidprose]

omg this is awesome!write more!

[deusssexmachina]

Hopefully later today, if I don´t fall asleep xD