The Truth Is Hard To Swallow [Thirty]

[detourtoyou]

Title: The Truth Is Hard To Swallow [Thirty]
Author: detourtoyou
Rating: NC-17 overall
Pairing: Jack/Alex
POV: 3rd
Summary: Of course the one time he decided to act his age, Alex would end up messing even that up. But in his defense, it was hard to act his age when he was faced with things so entirely beyond his age and maturity level, like a one-night decision

Comments

[new_againxo]

i want to cry this is just so wonderfully beautifully amazing omg :')
<333

[detourtoyou]

Aww thank you ♥
I'm glad you liked it! :)

[anonymous]

Oh my God, this is actually amazing! You wrote it so well! You HAVE to bring Caleb back into the next chapter! I miss him so much! When you're finished this story, you have to write another! Keep it up! :D

[detourtoyou]

Hahah, I may or may not have forgotten about Caleb. Sorry!
Thank you <3

[ylimexemily]

Oh my goodness, this is wonderful.
I seriously just...ugh, love love love LOVE.
I'm going to miss this so badly though.
Sequel please? (lul look at me being all annoying again~)

[detourtoyou]

Thank you ♥
This might've been my favorite I've written so far haha.
It's okay, you're not being annoying! But probably not; It was supposed to have a sequel, but I changed the ending so it would end. I got really burned out writing this--too long :/

[youthstate]

adfugheiwogt I DON'T WANT THIS TO END AT ALL EVER

but i was jw you wrote this

'Shoulders moving up in a shrug, Jack remarked offhandedly, “It’s not too far. It’s not that bad. Anyways, that’s not what I wanted to talk about. I actually came over ‘cause I wanted to ask you something.”

Jack nodded, grateful to bypass the moment. Except as soon as it had passed, he had brought with him another one to replace it. “I actually came over ‘cause I wanted to ask you something.”

Letting Jack bypass the moment, and keeping the conversation in his mind to continue for later, Alex raised a brow in question. “Ask what?” '

and i am just curious as to if jack meant to ask that question twice or if i am just pointing out a mistake and now i feel awkward if i am...but i do love your story

[detourtoyou]

WHOOPS. Definitely a mistake! Hahaha my bad. Writing at 4am maybe isn't always the best solution haha. Thank you for catching that though! Extra ♥♥ for you!

And thank you! :)

[detourtoyou]

Aw, it's okay. I'll look away! Hahaha.
Thank you so much! ♥