With Too Much Love In These Hearts

Feb 11, 2011 18:05

Title: With Too Much Love In These Hearts
Author:  detourtoyou 
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Jon/Spencer
POV: 3rd
Summary: Jon and Spencer are trying to adopt but with no luck. They put their hopes with pregnant couples and teenagers who are willing to let them adopt their baby, but with every potential adoption going wrong, it puts a strain on their hearts.
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patd, fanfic, pairing: jon/spencer

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Comments 17

alllover February 12 2011, 08:33:40 UTC
I absolutely loved this! So wonderfully written and the angst and... there needs to be more jon/spencer/baby angst.

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detourtoyou February 12 2011, 20:46:02 UTC
Thank you! :)
There really does need to be more D: And just more Jon/Spencer angst in general haha

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alllover February 13 2011, 08:23:55 UTC
yes yes yes! i'm working on writing so much of it. just wrote one little thing for vday a few days ago and possibly writing a part two of sorts for monday, but there can never be too much spencer/jon ever and this makes me want to write them even more. and i can't get over picturing spencer with bronx and jon adoring it but not being ready for one of their own as much as he wants to make spencer happy. love love low this, i had to read it again, haha.

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detourtoyou February 13 2011, 20:47:27 UTC
Hahah yay! There really isn't enough Jon/Spencer and it makes me sad :( Although I mostly write Ryan/Brendon from Panic so hurhur I guess I felt like I needed to fix this hahah
I had the best time imagining Spencer and Bronx for some reason. And Gabe LOL
Aw, thank you bb ♥ You're making me all blushy and happy.

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OP anonymous February 12 2011, 19:55:03 UTC
This was PERFECT!! this was exactly how I wanted it to be, anon, get out of my head!
This fic made my heart burn in a good way, the emotions were seemed so real and ... yeah... It was just so beautifully done.
thank you.

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Re: OP detourtoyou February 12 2011, 20:47:18 UTC
Really? YES! Score! :D But I like your head, it has very pretty ideas :) Okay, I'll stop being a creeper LOL
Thank you! I'm really happy you enjoyed it ♥

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squirrelvampire February 15 2011, 19:51:36 UTC
Can I cry? This was absolutely beautiful, and the way you presented it was absolutely stunning. I'm a sucker for retrospect(ivness?)
It was so complex but simple, and just fitting, open to more but at the same time perfectly rounded and just settled.
Nothing, absolutely nothing missing, and every digression was just called for and gaaaaah I LOVED IT.

I could go on and on and on about how wonderful this was. Just what I needed. Although the characters weren't what I needed,(Joncer phase is kind of a past thing for me haha.) it still fit. Maybe I cheated a little. Didn't focus on the names, uh-oh.

But yeah, I just turned my chair 180° so that I could wave to the wall, since on the other side is west. So yeah, if you see someone waving, it's me. I don't wave to strangers usually. Be honoured.

:D

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detourtoyou February 15 2011, 23:35:39 UTC
Wow. This just left me all speechless and giddy. This is really just the best comment, and you made my day. Thank you so much! ♥

I'm really glad you liked it! Aww, I'm so flattered right now. And I actually write more Ryan/Brendon so it's okay you cheated heheh.

Aw! I am! And if you see someone flailing, that's probably me :)

Thank you!! ♥♥

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squirrelvampire February 16 2011, 12:54:40 UTC
Believe me or not, I was speechless while writing the comment. Maybe I'll leave you a better one once i browse your journal for real :D (i actually checked it just to see where you're from so that I could wave in the right direction. xD)

I have to admit that I usually remember the plot of something - rarely ever names. cheating is acceptable sometimes ^^

And you're very very very welcome :D

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detourtoyou February 16 2011, 19:07:07 UTC
Aww, I feel like, twice as honored now :D And really touched! It's like every time leave a comment, my day = brighter XD

Hahah yes it is :)

Thank you so freaking much again ♥x1000

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madewithstars March 24 2011, 13:07:25 UTC
WAIT....Am I supposed to read this one?! I see my name...or rather I'm pretty that's my name. XD

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