Drabble Theme Two

[destinydivine]

I promised Tizzy this would be out a few days ago. I lied, obviously. But, better late then never I suppose. I'm not overly fond of this one - it did NOT go as I intended, and I think the feeling I wanted is missing entirely. So is the point >.> Oh well.

Go read. Shoo.

Comments

[astizya]

Nice work. The angst here is sexy, though it kills me. Go after him, Roy!! D: xD

[destinydivine]

Thank-you :)

The angst here is sexy

There's angst in there? >.> Well, I guess there is. I wrote this so long ago I forgot most of it lol. But yeah, Ed's like, "you're a jerk" and Roy just goes, "yeah, so what?"

*Whips Roy's butt* What she said Roy, go after him!!!

[astizya]

The angst with the whole relationship between them; it's definitely not an open, honest thing they've got going on, so there's tension there. And then, too, like you said, Roy acting rather nonchalant about the situation adds to the angst factor.

[destinydivine]

Yeah, Roy does act nonchalant, but I think it's the one line where he tells Ed that he hasn't abused power over him, and that he doesn't intend to that makes one think otherwise. Maybe it is all about the sex, or maybe not. But that's what I like about their relationship - it's not a romanticly-centered relationship....and if it was, then it wouldn't be Roy/Ed!

[threeonetwo]

Heheh, it's great the way Roy asks him not to leave without actually saying it, and such. Very amusing. It's just so like them. xD