Comments | destial: [NaNo] Ass Out of You and Me: Visit (Sam/Dean) 28/30

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[NaNo] Ass Out of You and Me: Visit (Sam/Dean) 28/30

Nov 29, 2010 20:03

Series: Ass Out of You and Me
Title: Visit
Author: destial
Pairing: Past Sam/Dean, Sam/Jess
Theme: 30 NaNo-Shots Special Table 2010
Prompt: Visit
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Complete disregard for all factual geography of Palo Alto. Angst and schmoop.
Spoilers: Pre-series, so if you saw episode one, you're good to go.
Word Count: 2000
Notes: Takes place at ( Read more... )

oh you challenge me so beautifully, so sweet my teeth rot, 30-nano shots, dean wants pie, incest for the wincest!, don't sue it's just a fic, sam bought jess a ring, here there be het, jess is a smurfs fan

Comments 8

framedhim November 30 2010, 01:20:16 UTC

This fic is going to wring me out. Emotions, emotions. I see it a mile away, almost don't want to read because it'll hurt in that 'I'm covering my eyes but my fingers are parted' type way, and then I read and now. Holy crow. Nicely done :)

jjinmo_356 November 30 2010, 01:33:58 UTC

Poor Dean, only thing I can think of is shit shit shit....Sam saw him but did he recognize Dean? I could really feel all the tenseness in Dean while he watched Sam with Jess.

slf630 November 30 2010, 02:09:16 UTC

Oh man. Poor poor Dean. He just can't catch a break.

He used to look at Dean like that
^That? One simple sentence hurt so much.

Can't believe this is almost done. I'm enjoying it so much-even though it hurts. But it hurts so good. <3

roxymissrose November 30 2010, 02:14:45 UTC

Crying out loud--that dragged me through the wringer. How effing sad was that? I'm kind of stunned at how much that affected me.

evil_knitter November 30 2010, 04:03:24 UTC

Holy Moses. You have this incredible way of putting emotions on display and forcing us readers to stare up at them in worship. Seriously, I am at a loss to describe the way these little updates make me feel. I feel beaten up and and patched back up again. You have captured Dean in a way that so few writers manage. It is masterful. I can't wait for more.