Ray's Caribbean Adventure--(F/K, K/OCs, NC-17)

Jun 03, 2007 18:44

Thanks to the lovely j_s_cavalcante and slidellra for beta. And thanks to nos4a2no9 for valiantly aiding and abbetting the porn, and for a superspeedy beta. This story would not exist as it is without her input throughout the writing process. Any errors are mine, all mine. Thanks again, my dear!

Written for stop_drop_porn, for moosesal’s prompt of "ring."

Ray's Caribbean Adventure
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fic: due south, porn, vacation, due south, rayk/fraser, fic

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anonymous September 22 2007, 13:11:31 UTC
VIII.
Sometimes he feels like going north. There, at least, the landscape will reflect the desolate landscape inside of his heart. But he can't contemplate leaving their familiar haunts. Sometimes it feels like those haunts are all he has left of him.

Sincerely,
Team Angst

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dessert_first September 22 2007, 18:57:27 UTC
"So just go already!" Yvette frowns at Ray, arms crossed under her substantial breasts. "I told you, the guy who sold you the poncho and that other crap is long gone, and it doesn't matter how long you keep coming round his old street corners. You should have told him you weren't sure about the color when you bought it ( ... )

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anonymous September 23 2007, 17:03:12 UTC
VIII.
Sometimes, he feels like going north. There, at least, the landscape will reflect the desolate landscape inside of his heart. But he can't contemplate leaving their familiar haunts. Sometimes, it feels like those haunts are all he has left of him.

Sometimes, he feels like going south, down into the deserts of the west. There, the landscape will still reflect the bleakness of his soul, but the memories might ease their choke hold. There are no shared spaces in the desert, no repositories of emotion and ideas to encounter and brood over.

Angstfully yours,
TA

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dessert_first September 23 2007, 17:26:24 UTC
"So you're saying you wanna go Southwest?" Yvette says slowly. "Except, since we're now in Mexico, it would actually be Northwest."

"Yeah," Ray says, making the little skeleton dance again, just for the heck of it. "I got a hankering for some chili. And I'm taking my damn haunts with me." Fraser might get a kick out of them.

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green_grrl December 29 2007, 16:30:45 UTC
Eeee! Why did I not see this before?! I love Ray on vacation "not" thinking about Fraser at every moment. *smooshes and pets him* Yay for drunken phone calls!

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dessert_first December 29 2007, 19:25:05 UTC
Glad you liked it! Thanks for letting me know. How go your holidays?

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green_grrl December 29 2007, 19:30:23 UTC
Holidays were fantabulous! Am now home with a suitcase full of laundry and presents, and flist skip=a zillion. :-D

And your holidays? ♥

(Santa!Ronon! Hee!)

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dessert_first December 29 2007, 19:47:03 UTC
Oooh, fantabulous sounds good! My holidays are kind of ongoing still. They've been good so far, a lot of fun. It's on my home turf, so I didn't have to travel. The family comes to me; I just feed them. :)

And yes, Santa!Ronon! beeej made it, and this one. Nothing says holiday cheer like a large Satedan warrior, don't you think?

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ignazwisdom May 18 2008, 03:07:37 UTC
Holy mother of GOD, Dess. This is like the hottest thing EVER. I don't think I realized just how much I love slutty!Kowalski until this moment, but good lord, do I love him.

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dessert_first May 18 2008, 21:50:54 UTC
Oh, thank you, Iggy! Slutty!Kowalski is one of my favorites. You're so sweet to unbury and fb on this story. It was fun to write; I should seek out more deadlines. :)

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nessreader January 27 2010, 22:09:06 UTC

This is lovely and I am terribly overdue in feedbacking it. Drunkdial!Ray has to be a bulletproof kink, and you write him perfectly.

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dessert_first January 28 2010, 00:22:15 UTC
Oh, thank you! It's so nice to get feedback on an old story like this. I'm really glad to hear you liked it. And hey, if Ray is gonna drunkdial, calling Fraser is definitely the way to go. :)

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