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desree_rd

Primeval: A Lesson in Faith

Dec 24, 2010 22:38

Title: A Lesson in Faith
Author: Desiree
Rating: PG
Spoilers: 1x06
Characters: Stephen Hart, Nick Cutter
Disclaimer: Not mine. Although a girl can dream =)
Summary: Stuck in a B&B over Christmas, Nick and Stephen finally talk.
A/N: My Secret Santa contribution =) Fornietie . Prompts Nick/Stephen - mistletoe medicine - angst - h/c.
...so this story didn't turn ( Read more... )

character:nick_cutter, fandom:primeval, character:stephen_hart

Comments 26

lukadreaming December 24 2010, 22:06:28 UTC

That's the conversation they should have had, plus addressing the fact that Helen might well have been lying!

desree_rd December 28 2010, 09:16:44 UTC

Thanks =D

fredbassett December 24 2010, 22:32:09 UTC

Aw, boys"

Lovely :)

desree_rd December 28 2010, 09:16:59 UTC

Thank you!

taricha December 25 2010, 06:08:59 UTC

I loved how smoothly the idea of Helen lying was woven in - from everything Stephen said, it seemed like a legitimate possibility, one that was never addressed (because, well, the series went with the idea that she wasn't). It was a smooth transition, and a wonderful conversation.

desree_rd December 28 2010, 09:18:36 UTC

Thanks!

It was something that always bugged me a bit about Nick's reaction in the show...well, that's what ff is for =)

reggietate December 25 2010, 10:06:45 UTC

*squishes the angsty boys* That was terrific!

desree_rd December 28 2010, 09:18:58 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked =D

munchkinofdoom December 25 2010, 10:16:43 UTC

This was a conversation that was long overdue. But I think what I love most about this story is your use of imagery. Those opening paragraphs are lovely.

desree_rd December 28 2010, 09:19:28 UTC

It was! And thank you =D