Saiyuki FanFic, Heaven Times Three

Mar 08, 2008 16:30

Title: Heaven Times Three
Author: despina_moon
Rating: NC17
Warnings: Not Worksafe! Some Violence, M/M/M sex
Word count: 7,000 give or take
Summary: Written for springkink. The prompt is: Saiyuki Gaiden, Tenpou/Kenren/Gojun: Love triangle that ends in a sexy threesome - I don't care which two are a couple.

A/N: Many many thanks to imayb1 for her amazing beta skills and ( Read more... )

saiyuki gaiden, saiyuki fic

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7veilsphaedra March 9 2008, 03:47:03 UTC
That is a hot, explosive PWP. I can imagine Kenren and Tenpou being too much for the dragon-king to handle, and I enjoyed their banter. I was hoping to see Goujun top Tenpou though at least once during their rounds, but I can also see Tenpou managing to avoid that position just for the sake of being the most clever person there. Wonderful job!

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despina_moon March 9 2008, 04:04:23 UTC
Thank you for your wonderful review!

Quite honestly, I forced myself to quit before another 2,000 words of Tenpou taking it from Goujun happened - believe me - it was close. I really like this threesome and and suspect I may revisit them.

Thanks again for taking the time to read and review.

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onnas_baka_gaki March 9 2008, 05:06:44 UTC
Nice, tasty imagery. I have always found Goujun an intriguing character - barely seen but unforgettable.

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despina_moon March 9 2008, 07:20:59 UTC
Thanks, Onna! This story turned out to be quite the monster. It didn't want to end.

Goujun's made quite an impression in the Gaiden manga. He's in there quite a bit, but it's not a happy story, of course.

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i_am_zan March 9 2008, 06:48:45 UTC
*oh oh fans self!* - incoherency ensues .uhm yes... uhn no useful comments!

But yeah! we used the same scene! Cool! This is WHY, precisely WHY zan doesn't write smut!!!

Because I R rubbish at it!

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despina_moon March 9 2008, 07:27:45 UTC
Thanks, Zan! I'm very glad you liked it.

Did we use the same scene? OMG - we did! I just ran off to finally read yours. I didn't read anybody else's Kenren/Tenpou/Goujun story until I posted this.

Personally, I loved yours. I'll take emotion and story over smut most days. I was just complaining about being bored with writing smut, so there.

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i_am_zan March 9 2008, 10:09:25 UTC
I've been wanting to use 'the' in forever!

I loved yours too. that's ok then, it's fair exchange! ^__^ We can appreciate them both and then it'll feel like twice the fic we both have!

Ehh...yes sense I do not make! hee!

But ... but you can't be bored writing smut... you do it so well! Hee!

Take care, do try to enjoy the rest of your weekend!

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lillypuff March 9 2008, 18:08:33 UTC
WOAH. That was hot =) I loved the part where Goujun admits to wanting to lick Kenren, I can just see the General's expression, sort of like 'wait, did he just say yes?'. lol

I love how you had them reacting and responding to each other and Tenpou's protectiveness over Kenren made me smile wickedly.

All in all, a lovely, yummy fic =)

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despina_moon March 9 2008, 19:02:32 UTC
I am so pleased you liked it!

I cheated with the licking part. Doesn't everyone want to lick Kenren? Yeah - Tenpou knows. :D

Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

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imayb1 March 11 2008, 01:00:57 UTC
I told you your readers would like it. ;D You write very well and it's fun to read over your work. I'm glad to help.

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