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roxmorgirl August 17 2014, 00:16:44 UTC
Aw, I feel so bad for Kennedie! She's got a rough time ahead of her I think :( This is going to take some getting used to for her! She's so pretty though, and I'm excited to see how her musical career goes! Pip seemed nice, too :) Although not much in the potential-husband department, seeing as he already has a kid? Oh well. Ken's probably not ready to think about that again anyway. I feel so bad for her, losing her daughter! :(

Great first chapter! No worries if they're short - I find I get chapters out a lot more frequently when they're shorter!

Can't wait to read more :)

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desirae333 August 17 2014, 21:08:19 UTC
Yeah, it hurts to write because I love her and Jake so much and I want them to be happy. :( All I can say is after a LONG time of pain she will be happy again.
Pip was very nice to Kennedie, but I am not sure he sees her like that or that she sees him like that yet, or if she will.
Thanks for reading and commenting!!

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tyrfish August 17 2014, 16:42:04 UTC
I'm really curious about why the Immortals decided to change their ways now... I wonder if it's a good reason or a bad reason :P Also it would be interesting to see how much they know of the supernatural world - the more hidden parts, that is, like of the Elite and the Old Ones and whatever else you dream up, if you head in that direction. Whatever happens, I hope to find out more about their life and culture. They seem really interesting!
Poor Kennedie though. What did she do in that night I wonder?? Lesson one: never drink alone :P

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desirae333 August 17 2014, 21:12:23 UTC
You will find out :)
I will tell you that the Immortals don't know a whole lot about the supernatural world since they kept to themselves a lot to avoid being known. What would be a better question is how much of the supernatural world knows about theirs?
You'll get to know their culture more in the future generations, that's all I will say. ;)
Kennedie will do well to learn from that lesson!
Thank you for reading and commenting <3

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your_simness August 20 2014, 03:50:03 UTC
This is wonderful. I can't wait to read more. The story line and everything is so intriguing. Kennedie is so pretty. I really want to see how the story plays out. Great update!! :D

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desirae333 August 20 2014, 13:11:42 UTC
awe thanks :P I am glad you are enjoying it. I think I'm going to update the Spence legacy before this one but we will see.

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tale_legacy August 25 2014, 15:40:11 UTC
Aww, so glad I finally had time to catch up on this, it's such a interesting story :) I feel so much sympathy for Kennedie, no one should ever go through what she is..I don't blame her for having a meltdown like she has done...who wouldn't in her situation?

Great chapter :)

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valitrix October 12 2014, 10:00:40 UTC
Awww, poor Kennedie! I hope things start looking up for her soon, though being as this is a drama it'll probably be awhile, right?

Great chapter! I can't wait to see where it goes.

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