Aw, I feel so bad for Kennedie! She's got a rough time ahead of her I think :( This is going to take some getting used to for her! She's so pretty though, and I'm excited to see how her musical career goes! Pip seemed nice, too :) Although not much in the potential-husband department, seeing as he already has a kid? Oh well. Ken's probably not ready to think about that again anyway. I feel so bad for her, losing her daughter! :(
Great first chapter! No worries if they're short - I find I get chapters out a lot more frequently when they're shorter!
Yeah, it hurts to write because I love her and Jake so much and I want them to be happy. :( All I can say is after a LONG time of pain she will be happy again. Pip was very nice to Kennedie, but I am not sure he sees her like that or that she sees him like that yet, or if she will. Thanks for reading and commenting!!
I'm really curious about why the Immortals decided to change their ways now... I wonder if it's a good reason or a bad reason :P Also it would be interesting to see how much they know of the supernatural world - the more hidden parts, that is, like of the Elite and the Old Ones and whatever else you dream up, if you head in that direction. Whatever happens, I hope to find out more about their life and culture. They seem really interesting! Poor Kennedie though. What did she do in that night I wonder?? Lesson one: never drink alone :P
You will find out :) I will tell you that the Immortals don't know a whole lot about the supernatural world since they kept to themselves a lot to avoid being known. What would be a better question is how much of the supernatural world knows about theirs? You'll get to know their culture more in the future generations, that's all I will say. ;) Kennedie will do well to learn from that lesson! Thank you for reading and commenting <3
This is wonderful. I can't wait to read more. The story line and everything is so intriguing. Kennedie is so pretty. I really want to see how the story plays out. Great update!! :D
Aww, so glad I finally had time to catch up on this, it's such a interesting story :) I feel so much sympathy for Kennedie, no one should ever go through what she is..I don't blame her for having a meltdown like she has done...who wouldn't in her situation?
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Great first chapter! No worries if they're short - I find I get chapters out a lot more frequently when they're shorter!
Can't wait to read more :)
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Pip was very nice to Kennedie, but I am not sure he sees her like that or that she sees him like that yet, or if she will.
Thanks for reading and commenting!!
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Poor Kennedie though. What did she do in that night I wonder?? Lesson one: never drink alone :P
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I will tell you that the Immortals don't know a whole lot about the supernatural world since they kept to themselves a lot to avoid being known. What would be a better question is how much of the supernatural world knows about theirs?
You'll get to know their culture more in the future generations, that's all I will say. ;)
Kennedie will do well to learn from that lesson!
Thank you for reading and commenting <3
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Great chapter :)
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Great chapter! I can't wait to see where it goes.
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