Missing

[desinere]

Missing

Can you stop, please?
Can you stop the fire?
You can’t stop the fire,
you won't say the words.
Please, Please…

Please, please forgive me,
But I won't be home again.

Ryan blinked, his mind in a haze. A frown painted upon his pale face, he looked around, and he stared hard at the cracked cement walls of the rather desolate room he was in.

He felt

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Wow

[velja]

Wow, that's just about all I can say right now. And actually my eyes are too blurry from tears to see clearly what I write here.
Astonishingly I started crying when I realized that it was all just a dream poor Ry had to go through. When he woke up in Chad's arms.

I'm amazed. Really, wow!

[maomarty]

this was like a punch straight to my stomach.
so hard, so beautiful, so deep, so angsty...this is the kind of story I fancy the most, where all the angst comes to a sort of bitter happy ending.
bitter, because you know the problem isn't solved, is just...sleeping. for a while.

love the evanescence as well, even if I prefer the first years to what they are doing right now.