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Mar 09, 2009 01:18

Story: The Mediator
Author: desfinado
Characters: Sasuke, Suigetsu, Karin
Disclaimer: Characters belong to Naruto, and I do not profit from this story.
Warnings: Yaoi, het, threesome, light d/s, NC-17
Summary: "Do you always watch your teammates fuck, Sasuke?"

( The Mediator )

naruto, fic

Comments 27

imlikat March 9 2009, 06:10:01 UTC

Ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ^______^

Mmmm, this <3 Is so gooooood, i loved it. I am about to pass out, however - I found this on my last email-check of the night - but I will be back after sleep for a proper comment. But god, GOOOOOOOD. GOOOOOOOOD.

desfinado March 9 2009, 16:35:43 UTC

Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it. Three "gooooooooooood"s is pretty impressive, I don't know if I've ever got that many before! :D Thanks again.

imlikat March 9 2009, 16:40:58 UTC

omg thom yorke *molests*

desfinado March 9 2009, 17:09:12 UTC

Thom Yorke facepalm! Even better!

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sub_textual March 9 2009, 09:55:27 UTC

Holy fucking mother of god.

It is 6am and I am delirious. Will come back with good review when uh, I am more awake and coherent. This was AMAZING. *O* WOW.

desfinado March 9 2009, 16:37:13 UTC

Haha what are you doing reading porn at 6am? (Who am I kidding, I've probably done it before) Thanks for taking the time to read and I am SO glad you liked it!

sub_textual March 11 2009, 09:54:36 UTC

Okay, now that I've gone and soft released my monster of a chapter 10, I can finally write a somewhat coherent review here. Or as coherent as a 5:49am review can be.

Okay, let me just start with this: OH MY GOD THIS WAS SO FUCKING RIDICULOUSLY GOOD I CAN'T EVEN BEGIN TO EXPRESS HOW AMAZING IT WAS.

I loved how Sasuke found himself oddly aroused every time he caught Suigetsu and Karin, and subconsciously wanting to catch them more and more -- until he actually does. And then just this entire idea of mediation, power, and the AMOUNT of power he has over them both -- is just so fucking hot.

D/s can be done in such a bad way, and I really agree with imlikat and frackin_sweet when I say that you actually really did it justice -- using "Taichou" instead of "Master" and not crazy-cheezing the hell out of it. Instead it was fucking HOT -- the power Sasuke had over them, the fact that Suigetsu retained a LITTLE bit of his :|-ness ( ... )

desfinado March 12 2009, 04:24:50 UTC

Oh maaaaaaaan thank you so much!!! Honestly, I only bestow Big Comments upon stories I really respect so it means a lot to get one myself :D ( ... )

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desfinado March 9 2009, 16:38:54 UTC

I know, I loved that meme so much! I wrote FOUR stories for it, which was more than I had ever written for Naruto before - it was great for writing stuff without worrying about it being 100% perfect, or without having to put your name on it. There were some amazing stories on there too.

Heh, glad you appreciated those dynamics! It was really fun to write. Thanks again!

oh dear god jamina_chan March 9 2009, 12:23:34 UTC

omg...
I think I might have a new ot3 sneaking in on me. Owo

Much... amazing... wonderful...
gah.. *dies*

Re: oh dear god desfinado March 9 2009, 16:40:27 UTC

Haha awesome! I am rapidly falling for these three - I'm glad other people are too! Thanks for such a nice comment :D

Re: oh dear god jamina_chan March 9 2009, 17:29:21 UTC

Gah! *flails* But I despise Sasuke! D:
You're making me like him enough to go with this pairing! XD

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desfinado March 9 2009, 17:03:45 UTC

:D :D You have given me big goofy smiles! Thank you for such a detailed response ( ... )

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desfinado March 9 2009, 20:08:18 UTC

1. I didn't think you were disagreeing with Sasuke on top! I am just genuinely interested in why Sasuke bottoms so much in this fandom... I feel like, if someone just explained it to me, maybe I'd get it?? i want to get it. I have read some hot stories where it happens ( ... )