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Feb 27, 2009 11:52

Story: Surge
Author: desfinado
Characters: Sasuke, Suigetsu (in water form)
Disclaimer: Characters belong to Naruto, and I do not profit from this story.
Warnings: Yaoi, R... sexy water?
Summary: Today, when Sasuke wades into the river to bathe, he knows he's not alone.

( Surge )

naruto, fic

Comments 21

anat_astarte February 27 2009, 17:13:29 UTC

Ooooh yeah! I loved this one!!! The feel of it is so smooth, the imagery is very fluid (^_~) and it's hot and sexy and Suigetsu in water form is oh so very oohhh, steamy! Love Sasuke's introspection and how Sasuke is swept up and away during this experience too :D

Thanks for posting this! *adds to mems!* <3

desfinado February 28 2009, 01:09:36 UTC

Thanks so much! I feel like when he shuts up Suigetsu can be pretty hot (or he can be when he's talking too, if you like that sort of thing haha). Glad the imagery worked for you, it was a bizarre thing to try and describe!

Thanks again :)

sidesmile February 27 2009, 18:24:22 UTC

Haha thanks so much for writing it (I'm the original requester) ^^ It was great! For this I'll use this awesome Ling icon.
I'm not normally a yaoi fan, but the idea I thought would be an interesting one.

desfinado February 28 2009, 01:08:23 UTC

Oh awesome! I was never sure if the OP saw it or not. Thank you SO much for the idea, really it would have never occured to me but I enjoyed so thuroughly!! :)

senyum February 27 2009, 19:20:31 UTC

This is awesome xD

desfinado February 28 2009, 01:07:17 UTC

Thanks! Nice thumbs up icon too! The only hand expression icon I have for Sasuke is a little less friendly, heh.

senyum February 28 2009, 05:12:52 UTC

Hahahaha slightly more IC though xD

animehead February 27 2009, 20:35:25 UTC

THAT was very nice. I don't even have words to describe it. Just... wonderful.

desfinado February 28 2009, 01:06:29 UTC

:) Thanks for taking the time to review! Glad you enjoyed!

imlikat February 27 2009, 21:16:26 UTC

DUDE this one is awesome :D I freaking LOVE it... there's just something so hot about Sasuke being like... molested by something he can't even really see. And letting it happen. Kind of. I hesitate to say this, but it's... it's almost like tentacle porn XD BUT ONLY MUCH HOTTER. Mmmmm, waterform!Suigetsu, you are such a sex machine <3 god, I love the way the water teases him, almost taunting him. And Sasuke orgasm, into the water, heeeeee, so hot <3

desfinado February 28 2009, 01:05:28 UTC

Wooo! Thanks :D I will admit I am not totally adverse to tentacles, or Sasuke getting molested and feeling flustered/turned-on in general, heh. It was funny writing Suigetsu without that mouth on him, wonder what was going through his head....

Thanks again!!