ficlet - Bronnwyn and Zack

[desert_anbu]

Title: Drabble 1 (so creative, I know)
Genre: Fantasy, Humor
Rating: T+
Notes: I started writing and this came out. I don't know who they are or where they came from but oh well. I don't normally write this way so I'm not sure if I'm happy with the style, but there you go. Hopefully there are few to no mistakes, but if you see any let me know.

Comments

marvelous

[darkgoddesskoni]

Really, quite lovely. I enjoyed your tone of voice, and the way you started it all. I have to apologize because I could not stop thinking about Anita Blake characters.

It stands alone as a really adorable piece of fiction though.

Re: marvelous

[desert_anbu]

Yes, unfortunately, it does remind me of Anita Blake as well. I don't particularly like those stories either. Urff. But there's no helping it, that's how I see werewolves. More or less.

Thank you!! :)

[ex_niapri151]

Aww, cute! I like the characters a lot, and your writing is really good. Nice to see you use first person, too. ;)

[desert_anbu]

I don't normally use first person, I'm rather surprised that's how it turned out, actually. I'm glad you liked it! :)

[desert_anbu]

I will probably write more about them, yes. I've already got other scenes with them stuck in my head and a story is forming. I wasn't expecting it but hey, if it gets me writing... :)

Thank you!

[desert_anbu]

Glad you liked it! :)

[sinulatan]

This was nice. :D I really liked the interaction of both your characters! Quite sweet and very playful.

[desert_anbu]

Thank ya! :3