Naruto: Learn to Swim (Ino/Chou)

[des_butterfly]

She stood awkwardly on the shore, the thin straps of her bathing suit top twisting against her sunburnt shoulders.  The wind had tangled her hair around her neck and the salt in the breeze made it frizz slightly.  Her lips were chapped and parted in an uncertain noise of dismay and she prodded at the water with her toes.

Even at eleven and a

Comments

[m_a_foxfire]

I love your work. Chouji's such an underrated character, and it's great to see him written as more than comedy relief.

[downjune]

i really like your team 10 stuff. Their relationship is intense but understated and subtle. And so much sweeter for it. Great work!

[essyllus]

It was really sweet. ^_^

There are some typos though- "Haruno" and "bellyful".

[shafted_artist]

That is the cutest and sweetest InoChou I've read in awhile! I love the ending and the anology to miso soup. Excellent work, as always.

Eraya ^_~

[riah_chan]

So sweet!