Comments | des_solace: Naruto: Tension (NaruSasu)

des_butterfly in des_solace

Naruto: Tension (NaruSasu)

Feb 26, 2007 18:30

His back ached, where the edge of the counter cut into the space right above his hips, and he was trying to scramble forward to ease that except Naruto was in the way, pushing his knees against his thighs and biting at the soft skin below his ear.

Sasuke shifted and his elbow dug into a sweaty chest.

Naruto growled and shoved their hips ( Read more... )

naruto/sasuke, smut, sasuke, naruto

Comments 33

rabid_fangrrl February 26 2007, 23:49:17 UTC

guh.

*punches you in the head*

I've missed your sparcely eloquent and emotionally taut narusasu.

des_butterfly February 26 2007, 23:50:44 UTC

blame myrafur. I can't smut if she doesn't have internets. :(

rabid_fangrrl February 26 2007, 23:53:12 UTC

You can smut from my lap...top.

this of course, means you will have to wear a collar.

joyinthedance February 27 2007, 00:32:24 UTC

Brilliant as always.

When I read your stuff I can always exactly picture and feel everything happening. "Sparsely eloquent and emotionally taut" is a very apt description.

innerve February 27 2007, 00:46:13 UTC

Uhhhn. Sexy. You're fantastic at NaruSasu.

beachlass February 27 2007, 01:02:59 UTC

Oh. Oh God. I have no words. They've melted and I think they are dripping out my ears.

The sex. The utterly heartstopping sex. Which is not fucking. Bitchy and so in denial and coming as soon as Naruto picked him up? You've nailed their characters. Um. To the counter.

guh.

goldeyedkitsune February 27 2007, 01:16:27 UTC

UNFG. <3

I love this sort of dynamic with NaruSasu. It just... works.