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derry667

Supernatural/Numb3rs fic - Take a Long Line 2/3

Mar 25, 2007 11:54

Okay. This really did take me a bit longer than I expected, but in the category of "better late than never"...

Title: Take a Long Line
Fandoms: Numb3rs and Supernatural (Winchester "reality", Eppes POV)
Disclaimer: Still don't own any of these characters or scenarios. Still hoping to get away with borrowing them. Still no monetary profit ( Read more... )

supernatural, numb3rs, fic

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derry667 March 26 2007, 11:06:51 UTC

Thank you! I do hope to get the last part done soonish. But of course, that is what I said last time. Stll, here's hoping, eh? ;-)

iluvroadrunner6 March 25 2007, 02:44:17 UTC

oooo...this keeps getting better.

i can't wait to see how this goes. really awesome.

derry667 March 26 2007, 11:07:51 UTC

Thanks! Glad you're still enjoying it.

sablecain March 25 2007, 02:51:24 UTC

WOW! that was awesome and I hope you don't make us wait to long for part three! Awesome! Loved Sammy and poor Charlie, duped by the puppy eyes. Hee. Lovely.

derry667 March 26 2007, 11:10:29 UTC

Hehehe. The puppy eyes are deadly, aren't they?

Glad you liked it!

shallowz March 25 2007, 04:06:34 UTC

This is just so good!! Love the characterizations. Can't wait to read chapter 3.:D

derry667 March 26 2007, 11:13:52 UTC

Thank you! Hope to get chapter 3 written a little quicker than two was. ;-)

kirei_seimei March 25 2007, 04:25:07 UTC

I love this second part! Reading this kind of makes me realise that if forced to pick a favourite character from each pair of brothers I would probably pick the older in each case... but that said, I think this is a really great characterisation of both of them, and a compelling Part 2.

Fantastic how Sam mixes truth and lies to get Charlie to help him, and brilliant how Charlie is sucked into helping him after figuring out where he thinks Sam is coming from. I enjoyed how Charlie observes the differences in Sam after he ties him up, I think you nail Sam's increasing ability to be duplicitious (particularly through the use of his body language), although my favourite line is: Sam Winchester moves like a soldier. This can't be good. I think I like that line because for the most part, Sam railed against his (and Dean's) upbringing as warriors, and for someone else to note his behaviour in that way is some very clever writing ( ... )

derry667 March 26 2007, 12:27:11 UTC

Hiya! Yeah, I have to admit that I too am slightly more partial to the elder brother in both the Eppes and Winchester families. But I'm also exceedingly fond of their little brothers - and both of their dads too! ;-)

I loved the way Sam ruthlessly used a combination of truth and lies when he was in police custody in "The Usual Suspects". So yeah, I liked the idea of him using "selectively edited" truth with Charlie. I find the different facets of Sam fascinating. Really, what I love most about the Winchesters is they are complex characters - what you see on the surface is far from the whole story with either of them (all three of them?).

The Eppes brothers? Gotta love 'em! Nuff said. ;-)

And yes, my thinking was that by going to see Charlie, Sam changed things and set in motion a sequence of events that put Charlie in danger of the arsonist. Hence Sam gets the warning vision, after he's met Charlie and started to change things.

You still got that Pretender trilogy? I still haven't seen the show, but what's this about