Retribution is at Hand: Chapter 3

Sep 13, 2009 08:58

3: Light’s Muse

The people of the Argent Dawn were silent, to say the least. Lyrissa’s short welcome was extended until two days later. She rested near the camp’s fire, wrapped in her cloak until she saw Officer Pureheart walk towards her.

Standing up, she noticed a man behind her of exact height, hooded and clad in gray and brown. He bore no ( Read more... )

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derrick_mace September 14 2009, 02:46:27 UTC
The epitaph for Uther was written canonally. I wonder who actually wrote it, but I have my guesses.

As for Jack--You'll see more character of him soon enough. He is designed to embody the traditional citizen. He's curious.

As for the Thil'danis--he will come more into play later on. I didn't say prophecy but vision, since the latter is more obscure and less cliche.

But I'm glad you liked it. I'm working on chapter 3 as we speak.

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