Retribution is at Hand, Chapter 1
A cold breeze swept above Stormwind City, carrying reddening leaves and the brisk winds of autumn. It was mid October, and the sky was gray with thick clouds and blanketed with cold mist. Lantern lights and torches flickered in the air, and the city as a whole seemed like a ghost town.
Few citizens left their houses in this time of late noon, ( Read more... )
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Lyrissa is my character, Jaina is canon. Jaina is a sorceress, pretty much one of the best, and here, Lyrissa's senior.
On the 'less old, more friend' comment, Lyrissa isn't that old, she's in her mid 20s, but she feels the 'old friend' gives her age. Weird, I know.
On reluctncy, you will find with part 2 of this chapter some clarification on why she's unnerved, and I'll make it OMINOUSLY DRAMATIC IN A GOOD WAY. you'll like it; I know I did.
And I actually strived to write neat writing. If i was stupid, I'll say it strives to resemble Tolkien... But we all know what'll happen then. :)
on Tolkien! I managed to buy the LAST War of the Ring from the furthest bookstore before the fame became bloody extinct! I was so happy I could have pissed myself.
Yeah, I'm that weird.
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