Dollhouse fic: The Senator's Son; PG-13

[derevko_child]

Title: The Senator's Son
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Adelle DeWitt, Laurence Dominic
Words: 2, 498
Disclaimer: Don't own Dollhouse

Notes: au_bingo prompt-- Alternate History: Personal life of character changed

Comments

[pookiesbleubass]

OHAI! Been reading some of your D/D fics and much <3 for them!

Just popped in to point out an error.
Her quirks a brow.

/relurks

[derevko_child]

Nice catch. Thanks XD

Oh, and Merry Christmas to you!

[cassi0pei4]

I love that you're doing au_bingo too. This ficlet was excellent, and makes me want to see more! (When does alt!Dom meet Dewitt again? Do they get up to hijinks together? This happens to me with all short AU stories.)

Sidenote: Princeton doesn't offer MBAs as it has no professional schools of any kind. Maybe change it to Penn? An MBA from the Wharton School is pretty hardcore.

[derevko_child]

Thank you XD (I have a feeling alt!Dom would go back to Adelle office several months later under the pretense of being a client but actually there to ask alt!Dewitt on a date... heh)

Oh, I thought Princeton had an MBA program because I read a Yahoo! article with a top ten MBA programs list and I remember Princeton being in there.

My mom's boss is from the Wharton School. He's brilliant. (changing it now...)

[darling_ashes]

This was great! Dominic being a client for his father, meeting Adelle and sparks flying.

[derevko_child]

Thank you XD (And Merry Christmas!)

[darling_ashes]

Merry Christmas!

[cold_queen_5]

Oh, Laurence. You're so deliciously disapproving. I'd be interested in reading more, seeing how that disapproval manifests in a romantic relationship between them. I can see them being together despite that derision, but it would always be ever present.

Fantastic AU. I've actually toyed with the idea of an AU myself for this fandom, I've just never actually gotten around to writing it. MAYBE YOU INSPIRE ME, NEH?

[rogoblue]

Oh, c'mon, why not write it!

You'd have one reader.

[derevko_child]

Laurence probably gives away his disapproving glare to everybody like a a candy store giving away cheap candy. Heh.

Thank you XD And write that AU! I feel like I'm the crazy AU lady of the fandom, churning out AUs here and there. lol. I have a few more unfinished AUs, plus several prompts from au_bingo Heh.

[cold_queen_5]

I'm giving serious thought to it. I do love the challenge of writing Dollhouse. And you DO inspire me with your AUs that make me want to write AUs. (Like how I wanted to do a Dollhouse remake of "The Thomas Crowne Affair"...naturally "The Adelle Dewitt Affair".

Also, damnit, now I want to write it again.

[rogoblue]

I loved Dom in this. I truly did. Nowhere near comfortable in his own skin even though he's doing the right thing for daddy (even though daddy's blood sons couldn't care less).

He should be able to follow through on the aren't they all blind comment.

[derevko_child]

Thanks! Dom's the ever-dependable one, always there to do what needs to be done.

He should be able to follow through on the aren't they all blind comment

Maybe after I finish all the prompts for au_bingo XD