Dollhouse fic - Enemies of My Soul, Conspirators in Pajamas; PG-13; Chapter 11

[derevko_child]

Title: Enemies of My Soul, Conspirators in Pajamas (An Epic Alias-Dollhouse Crossover)
Rating: PG-13 for language, and violence
Characters: Michael Vaughn, Laurence Dominic, Jack Bristow, Adelle DeWitt
Pairing: Adelle DeWitt/Laurence Dominic
Disclaimer: I do not own Dollhouse. Or Alias.
Words: 4,153
Notes: Spoilers for season 1 of Dollhouse and

Comments

[morgan72uk]

I know it's good that they extracted her before bringing down the Dollhouse - but the rest of it is just so sad. They just do seem like 2 people for whom things don't work out.
And interesting take on his family - who appear quite, well normal.

[derevko_child]

I think everything will work out for those two, in the end... I think.

And I think if you take Dominic out of the Dollhouse, he'll turn out to be a pretty normal dude-- who works for the NSA and can probably make you disappear the way Langton made Nolan disappear. So... *shrugs*

Thank you for commenting :D

[shi_naynay]

Separation anxiety, let them show you it. Why must things always be so complicated? Of course, then there'd be no story. But still. :(

I'm glad the men who stormed Adelle's office and shot her turned out to be good guys (Vaughn!), and that he only shot her with a tranquilizer (and, well, in the knee). Phew! I was worried as to what and who that would be.

I loved the little look into Dom's real life family. Aw. Although, it's a bit weird to think of his name being anything other than Laurence and/or Dominic, lol.

[derevko_child]

Complication makes things moar exciting, yes? lawlz.

I'm glad the men who stormed Adelle's office and shot her turned out to be good guys (Vaughn!), and that he only shot her with a tranquilizer (and, well, in the knee). Phew! I was worried as to what and who that would be.

This made me smile. I was worried that after a few chapters, you all will figure out who's behind the chaos in the prologue, and the Ben part. heh.

And I kinda thought that since Dominic was an NSA agent, that his name isn't really his name because of the background checks thingmabob.

Hee. Thanks for commenting XD

[demonqueen666]

But...but...something will happen of course and their paths will have to cross again, right? Right?? *wrings hands, bites fist*

[derevko_child]

...uh. Yes?

[nallain]

Wow, I loved this chapter! I also never really thought about it, but it is kind of logical that Dom has a different name - it`s just hard to imagine :) And, well, the story is developing so nicely, you have me hooked up for next chapters ;)

[derevko_child]

I also never really thought about it, but it is kind of logical that Dom has a different name

I kinda thought about the googleability factor of being undercover. Heheh

And thank you :D

[oltha_heri]

*does little dance that she knows all the call signs!*

This is shaping up to be really interesting. I kind of don't know what else to say other than KEEP WRITING! :D

[derevko_child]

Hee. I didn't know you already got to season 5. Yay, for knowing all the call signs!

I will keep writing. Although I'll probably take a break for a day or two after that inevitable-yet-still-depressing cancellation news.

And thank you XD