Dollhouse fic - Enemies of My Soul, Conspirators in Pajamas; pg-13; Chapter 3

[derevko_child]

Title: Enemies of My Soul, Conspirators in Pajamas (An Epic Alias-Dollhouse Crossover)
Rating: PG-13 for language, violence
Characters: Adelle, Dominic, Jack Bristow, Irina Derevko
Pairing: Adelle DeWitt/Laurence Dominic, Jack Bristow/Irina Derevko
Disclaimer: I do not own Dollhouse. Or Alias.
Notes: Spoilers for season 1 of Dollhouse and season 5

Comments

[miss_atom]

God I love this story so much. It is really developing well!! I love the DeWitt/Dominic dynamic you are writing! and the little bit of Jack/Irina made me smile!

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[derevko_child]

I'm so happy you liked this chapter (I had problems with this at the very last minute...)

Jack and Irina are adorable when they aren't trying to kill each other/be all manipulative and secretive (but then, that's what they do all the time...)

Thanks for commenting!

[miss_atom]

(but then, that's what they do all the time...)

If they didn't I wouldn't love them so much. haha, too much adorableness is overrated.

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[derevko_child]

What I love most about them is that even if they're just staring at each other and saying nothing at all, you'd still want them on your screen because nothing compares to their combined sexiness :O

(and that's the reason why I love DeWitt and Dominic too...)

[demonqueen666]

Oh lord, why do I have a feeling they're going to have to jump off the cliff after all? Whenever there's a cliff option involves, it almost always happens!

She’s a few inches smaller than him, but surprisingly, he doesn’t have to make an effort to match her strides, and she doesn’t seem to be having a hard time matching his.

Oh, hahaha, DENIAL. *giggles*

He takes note of the opening and closing of the pool facilities (the swimming pool in the 20th floor opens at 6 AM and closes at 12 midnight).

...Oh, please tell me that that's going where I think it is.

“She was abandoned by her agency. The consequences of this mission will have an adverse effect on her position.” Irina slightly tilts her head to the side, “And if Rossum Corp. finds out…”

*eyebrow raise*

All in all, a very nice chapter. Can't wait for more! :D

[derevko_child]

Oh lord, why do I have a feeling they're going to have to jump off the cliff after all? Whenever there's a cliff option involves, it almost always happens!

Or maybe Adelle might get her wish and they go straight to Plan C XD

...Oh, please tell me that that's going where I think it is.

*smiles*

*eyebrow raise*

I just have to say that everything after the prologue is a flashback.

And I'm going to shut up now.

Thank you for commenting :D

[aka_katya]

*squee!*

Luff this story!

Me thinks they should put on a "show" for the cameras just to you know....
really sell their cover *wink wink* also they need to have sexy fun times in the hotel pool :P

and if Irina's worried about Adelle, I'm very worried for Adelle **eek**

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[derevko_child]

Me thinks they should put on a "show" for the cameras just to you know.... really sell their cover *wink wink* also they need to have sexy fun times in the hotel pool :P

Hmm, sexy fun time with DeWitt/Dominic in the pool. We'll see (It's weird that I've fully mapped how the mission's going to pan out, but not the scenes for the dillydallying-around-coz-we're-tourists...)...

Hee. Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you liked this chapter. :)

[webeh]

I kind of want Adelle and Dominic to jump off the cliff. Cliff jumping is always really exciting. ;)

Can't wait until the next chapter.

[derevko_child]

I kind of want Adelle and Dominic to jump off the cliff. Cliff jumping is always really exciting. ;)

LOL. I'll take it into consideration when I'm debating over Plan A, B, or C. Hahaha!

Thanks for the comment ;)

[webeh]

It's like on Alias. Whenever cliff jumping is an option, that's always what happens. ;)

Are we going to get appearances by Sark? I was shipping him with Sydney for the longest time...

[derevko_child]

Cliff jumping's the only option in Alias. lulz

For the longest time, I believed Sark was Sydney's cousin or a relation of sorts. But they had this weird tension (I shipped Syd with Vaughn, btw. But I found the teases towards Sarkney - when I notice them - hawt...). We'll see if we can fit in Sark somewhere. *smiles*

[shi_naynay]

Spy Parents! Together! Being all cute, and not beating the crap out of each other. ♥ ♥ ♥

“She was abandoned by her agency. The consequences of this mission will have an adverse effect on her position.” Irina slightly tilts her head to the side, “And if Rossum Corp. finds out…”

My intrigue? Let me show you it.

He doesn’t take his eyes off her. The yellow light from the lamps make her face look softer and her eyes, greener.

*whispers* I think he likes her. *giggle*

[derevko_child]

*whispers* I think he likes her. *giggle*

You are making me giggle at 3 in the morning. :D

My intrigue? Let me show you it.

I'm starting to get nervous about your reactions to this. Hahaha!

[shi_naynay]

Hm. Now I'm even more intrigued by Irina's quote then. :/ What does it MEAN??

[derevko_child]

*smiles*

Truth takes time.