The Forgotten Memories - Chapter 1

[dephi]

Title: The Forgotten Memories - Chapter 1 : The Broken Sonata
Pairing: Well... It's suppose to be Ryoda, but still hinted in the earlier chapter
Author: dephiWords: 952

Comments

[hanny2luv]

I really want to know where ryo is. Wait, dont tell me yet, i know, u will reveal later right. I'll be waiting then.

Update soon. Nice work.

[dephi]

Ahaha...
Yess..
Just wait and see..
Though i can't guarantee it'll be happy ending..
Anyway,thank you for reading and commenting..
I'll start writing the next chapter as soon as i've finished my tasks..^^

[cherrylady6]

Uwaah finally I'm reading the 1st chapter!!
That really sounds like I did sth special ~
I really like it!
You said you messed up the grammar but it was like .. not at all? xD
I said you were exaggerating haha xD
I guess I'm as slow with reading as I am with writing xD
Baad ne ^^ Gomen for needing so long!!

Ueda felt a headache, his vision was getting blurred..
Someone, save me..

Kyaaaaah .. that killed me ..
please, someone save Tat-chan!!!
And I really liked that Jin was using 'Uebo' xDDD so cute ♥

But I really hope the one rescueing Tat-chan ISN'T Maru ..though that's mean :>

*hugs*

I can't really say Thank you for updating ne xDDDD
More, thank you for writing ♥
i'm curious of the next chapter!!

[dephi]

Oh my, no problem dear. Really...^^
Well, this chapter is beta-ed...
But just see from the 2nd until 4th chapter. They're such a mess.

Eh? Killed you? how could? And please, don't die just yet... :D
I've tried finishing b&w because of you so don't die yet... :D
Muwahahaha... Jin nee.. I couldn't seem to forget him in all of my fics.
Not really Maru. He's just...there.

You're welcome dear. I think I should be the one who say Thank you for reading and commenting... :D

[cherrylady6]

xDDD I still don't believe it. And even if, who cares ^^

Awwww you did because .. ano ..
Tat-chan said Someone save me ..
and OMGGG :OOO
That means sth bad happened >__<

Uwaaaaaaah finishing because of me? ahahah you don't have to xD
I don't want to force you into sth!!
But thanks so much :]
well, Jin was your first love, it's understandable ne xD
he is cute here .. I like him ^^
ah, do you like MaruDa? I just have to ask xDD

♥♥♥

[dephi]

Muwahahaha.
Really? :DDD
But it really is.. Since chapter 2-4 are unbetaed.

Well, well... I can't say anything about that, really. This is just...angst.. :D

Muwahahah. Nahhh.. It's fun having someone poking me. I'm soo late on updates recently...*sigh*
Jin is cute, deshou ♥♥♥
But tatchan is wayyyy cuter ♥♥♥♥♥
Maruda? Err... Not really. Why?

[grashiya01]

ohh.. goodness.. really interesting~~
*next*

[dephi]

hoho.. Captivating enough?
Thanks for reading and commenting ♥

[fancyann1974]

what is going on, why are maru and jin hidding it from everyon, what does ryo have to do withit
will ueda be ok
cant wait to find out
thank you for sharing

[dephi]

HEY! You're here again! I couldn't even begin to show how much I love your comments. Anyway, thank you for stopping by at this embarrassing first fic I'd ever made ♥