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Bleach - [Ulquiorra/Grimmjow, Grimmjow/Il Forte] - On Moving On (30 Lemons - #21)

Aug 18, 2006 23:25

Written for 30_lemons and posted here. Written because Shini had a mental image of Grimmjow jerking off after Forte's death that simply wouldn't go away. So, she wrote it! =D

Title: On Moving On
Author: shinigamikender
Fandom: Bleach
Pairing: Ulquiorra/Grimmjow Jagger Jack, Grimmjow Jagger Jack/Il Forte
Theme: #21 - Alone Time
Rating: R/NC-17 (PWP)
Summary: Ulquiorra ( Read more... )

challenge: 30 lemons, bleach: grimmjow, bleach: il forte, bleach: ulquiorra, series: bleach

Comments 16

kageisuke August 19 2006, 04:32:49 UTC

It wouldn't have taken much effort on Ulquiorra's part to pull his hand free, even of Grimmjow's viselike grip, but he didn't. He simply used his other hand

::laughs:: That line killed me... Out of everything, that one ironic line just slayed me... just used his other hand... ::snorts:: Great job! ::thumbs up:: this was hot and amusing! At least for that one part...

keikain August 19 2006, 04:36:11 UTC

*laughs* Gimpy Grimmy is so much fun to play with <3

X3 So very very glad you enjoyed!

electricpower August 19 2006, 05:18:48 UTC

Mmm. Grimjaw/Ulquiorra. So hot. ♥

(however, one little nitpick, you spelled erection with two r's a few times.)

keikain August 19 2006, 05:24:09 UTC

GrimmUlqui is so much <3

(^^; Eek! Thanks for the heads up! *goes to abuse the find and replace feature*)

ex_hitokiri August 19 2006, 05:56:40 UTC

Loved this fic. It was hot from beginning to end. I squee-ed like a sappy fangirl. Urgh.. they're just so lovingly fucked up together. @_@

keikain August 19 2006, 16:51:25 UTC

^^ So very glad you enjoyed~ <3 <3 <3

*laughs* They just have this weird dynamic that makes them so much fun to write together.

ai_kizu August 19 2006, 12:40:48 UTC

Awesome. Lovely as always. Is it wrong that I like Grimmjow to somewhat suffer?

keikain August 19 2006, 16:48:50 UTC

Thank you so much! ^^

(|D I think it's a fandom thing. Grimmjow is the most fun when we get to watch him in pain. XD Or something like that)

vsheartbreaker August 19 2006, 19:26:21 UTC

*in awe* I love this one even more than your last... Not only is this GrimmUlqui but it's also a GrimmForte(which I love. With passion). And you write them all so well, their behavior perfectly in character yet their emotions so much more (in)human (?), if you know what I mean. Most people screw that up. *sigh*
Wow, I managed to actually make this comment short. I was afraid that it would turn out as long as the DiForte one. OKAY I KNOW I TALK TOO MUCH. I think I should stfu now >_<<

keikain August 19 2006, 22:55:55 UTC

X33 Thanks~ (|D Haha. Yeah, some fics can kinda make them *seriously* more emotional than detached like they should be). GrimmIl is hot XD; But GrimmUlqui is definitely Shini's OTP.