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FIC: Unseen at the Deep'ning Eve

Jan 27, 2011 12:19

Title: Unseen at the Deep'ning Eve
Author: denorios
Rating: PG-13
Summary: WW1 AU: November 1918, Noyers
Pairing: Chris/Vin
Warnings: War.
Word Count: 1,120
Notes: The title is from the poem 'Matthew Copse' by John William Streets, killed and missing in action on 1st July 1916. Thanks to farad for suggesting the poem, and for so much more.

( Once in thy secret close, now almost bare, peace yielded up her bountiful largess... )

writing, fanfic: the magnificent seven, tv: the magnificent seven, ships: chris/vin

Comments 6

riverotter1951 January 27 2011, 14:24:05 UTC

An excellent addition to your WWI series. You have captured love perfectly.

slavelabour January 27 2011, 15:06:45 UTC

What a wonderful thing to read over morning caffeine! I want to point out different things and caress certain words and examine sentence structure and phrasing but everything I have to say would contain the same word: Beautiful. It's beautiful, they're beautiful, their love is beautiful. Even against the backdrop of the war or maybe because of it, the sweetness of them makes me want to cry. And this is where I fling myself on you and shamelessly beg for more.

cattraine January 27 2011, 18:04:51 UTC

Lovely.

vinchrisfan January 28 2011, 00:15:41 UTC

You make me speechless. All I can say is thanks! You capture them so beautifully.

fritti13 January 28 2011, 03:24:05 UTC

Amazing and beautiful. Well done!