White Collar Fic: Provisions

Nov 10, 2012 04:58

Author: dennih23
Title: Provisions
Word Count: 400
Rating:G
Character: Danny Brooks
Warnings and Content: none
Spoilers: 4x03 sort of

My entry for whitecollarlas - Round One, Challenge Four - prompt was "out of"

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character: danny brooks, last author standing, type: fic, character: neal caffrey, author: dennih23

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melles76 November 10 2012, 15:02:34 UTC
A very touching story. Beautifully written and yet sad to know what Neal/Danny had to do throughout his childhood. Well done!

Today he realized just how easy it had been for him to get want he wanted. Tomorrow there would be a new story and new prizes to claim.

I guess that was the jump-start for Neal's future career. :-)

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dennih23 November 11 2012, 16:10:55 UTC
Thank you - in my head Neal had a difficult childhood and this would have been how he learned how his smile could get him things he needed.

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daria234 November 10 2012, 21:06:26 UTC
I love this - very believable and sad but also showing his determination as well as his dishonesty.

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dennih23 November 11 2012, 16:13:38 UTC
Thank you - Neal/Danny would want to help out in any way he could to help his family.

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ladyrose42 November 10 2012, 21:59:17 UTC
People can be so generous. Here in the Hurricane Sandy, a mother went grocery shopping and some "evil" person stole her purse with all her money,credit cards, etc, meaning no food. The store announced it trying to shame the person into returning the purse. What happen, the other shoppers started giving her money voluntary (which she was refusing initally). They handed it to her kids too. She received enought to buy groceries for four kids and self.

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dennih23 November 11 2012, 16:14:17 UTC
This is such a wonderful story. It’s always good to hear about the positive that can come out of the worst situations. I am so glad that people found it in their hearts to help the woman.

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November 10, 2012 livejournal November 11 2012, 05:04:44 UTC
User joanne_c referenced to your post from November 10, 2012 saying: [...] aware that there may be unmarked spoilers in comments, and click carefully. Fanfic: Gen Provisions [...]

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leesa_perrie November 11 2012, 14:29:52 UTC
This was heart-breakingly beautiful - and very believable! :)

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dennih23 November 11 2012, 16:14:55 UTC
Who could resist little Danny Brooks and those blue eyes?

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