White Collar Fic: Meet the Mitchells

Jun 28, 2014 05:09

Title:  Meet the Mitchells
Author:  dennih23
Rating: G
Word Count: 4877
Summary: Peter meets El’s parents
Disclaimer:  Not mine, all characters belong to Jeff Eastin
Beta: Thank you Sholio - all mistakes are mine

A/N: for Aragarna who two years ago asked for a story on the first time Peter met El’s parents, also fills the Free Space on my Trope Bingo Card ( ( Read more... )

character elizabeth burke, character: peter burke, white collar fiction, bingos

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lov_pb June 28 2014, 17:50:23 UTC
Ahh ... this was delightful! Poor Peter trying his best to impress El's folks. All he had to do was be himself! He's a pretty impressive and wonderful man.
Thanks!I'm sure glad Ara requested this one.

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dennih23 June 28 2014, 21:10:48 UTC
I’m glad you enjoyed it. I could just imagine Peter being all nervous about meeting El’s parents. Peter definitely is a wonderful man. Thanks for reading.

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eldorah June 29 2014, 15:42:21 UTC
Aww, this was adorable!! I absolutely loved seeing Peter slowly gaining Alan's trust by passing all of his test. What a perfect moment at the end, with both couples out to dinner and stargazing. Wonderful read, thanks so much for sharing! =)

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dennih23 July 8 2014, 11:19:48 UTC
Thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. I could imagine Alan trying to test all of El’s boyfriends to see if any were smart enough to date his daughter. Once Alan knew that Peter was a good man, it was easier to cut Peter some slack and find some common ground to get to know each other. I think a lot of parents do that when their ‘little girl’ is involved in a new relationship.

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aragarna June 30 2014, 10:57:20 UTC
Awww lovely story! Loved it!
Poor Peter, what a first day! Gardening, getting punched...
Thank you so much for writing this. ♥

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dennih23 July 8 2014, 18:23:57 UTC
I’m so happy you enjoyed the story. I couldn’t resist making things a little difficult for Peter. Alan being a psychiatrist would want to ‘test’ potential suitors for his daughter. Peter is smart enough to realize that and just by being Peter Burke there was no way El’s parents couldn’t help but fall in love with him.

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kanarek13 July 2 2014, 20:46:56 UTC
Awwwww, this is so, sooooo delightful, shows just about everything that makes me love our Peter. He would definitely be nervous about meeting El's parents ♥ Love it how he passed all of Alan's tests and in the end proved that he is a wonderful guy :P

Warm and fuzzy and perfect :D Thanks for posting :D

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dennih23 July 8 2014, 18:24:23 UTC
Peter is definitely wonderful --- how could anyone not resist falling in love with him :D

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pipilj July 26 2014, 11:10:19 UTC
Poor Peter subjected to all the test. Glad he passed them. Love the relationship between El and Peter

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dennih23 August 4 2014, 11:56:09 UTC
Sorry for the delay in responding, glad you liked the story. I love Peter and El’s relationship and I am sure El’s father was critical of anyone who was dating his daughter.

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